情景导入
期末考试的书面表达题通常是:以 My Happy Life 或 A Day in Spring 为题,写一篇不少于五句话的小短文。
很多同学一看到空白格子就发懵。别怕!这一练教你一个"八句话框架":开头 1 句 + 中间 6 句 + 结尾 1 句。把前九练学过的句型往里一放,一篇完整的短文就成了。
核心词汇
| 单词/短语 | 意思 | 例句 |
|---|---|---|
| happy life | 快乐生活 | I have a happy life. |
| every day | 每天 | I read English every day. |
| after class | 课后 | I play ping-pong after class. |
| with my family | 和家人一起 | I go hiking with my family. |
| at school | 在学校 | I study hard at school. |
| wonderful | 精彩的 | What a wonderful day! |
句型与语法
第 1 句 · 开头亮身份:I am a student in Hangzhou. / My name is...
第 2-7 句 · 中间六句(每练贡献一句):
- 作息(第1练):I usually get up at 6:30.
- 季节(第2练):My favourite season is spring.
- 月份(第3练):My birthday is in May.
- 周末(第7练):On the weekend, I often ride a bike with my family.
- 进行时(第6练):Look! My cat is sleeping on my bed.
- 爱好(第9练):My hobby is drawing.
第 8 句 · 结尾抒感受:I have a happy life! / I love my school and my city!
检查三步:句首大写了吗?句号写了吗?动词形式对了吗?
听说训练
- A: The final exam is coming. Are you ready for writing? (期末考试快到了,写话你准备好了吗?)
- B: Yes! I have a magic plan: eight sentences. (准备好了!我有个妙招:八句话。)
- A: Eight sentences? Tell me more. (八句话?说来听听。)
- B: One sentence for the beginning, six for my life, and one for my feeling. (开头一句,中间六句写生活,结尾一句写感受。)
- A: That's smart! Let's practise together. (真聪明!我们一起练练吧。)
- B: OK! I am a student in Hangzhou... (好!我是一名杭州的学生……)
易错点
- 时态别打架:日常习惯用一般现在时,"看!正在……"才用 be doing,一篇短文里别乱切换。
- 句子要完整:Get up at 6:30. ❌(缺主语)→ I get up at 6:30. ✅
- 别逐字翻译中文:我很喜欢我的生活 → I very like my life ❌ → I like my life very much ✅
考点
- 书面表达:期末综合写话(My Happy Life / My School Life 等题目通用);
- 一般现在时与现在进行时的正确选用;
- 开头—中间—结尾的三段式结构,句首大写与标点规范。
诵读 Read Aloud
I am a student in Hangzhou. I usually get up at 6:30 and go to school at 7:20. My favourite season is spring, because the West Lake is very beautiful. My birthday is in May, and I always have a small party. On the weekend, I often ride a bike with my family along the Grand Canal. My hobby is drawing, and I draw every day. Look! My cat is sleeping beside my desk now. I have a happy life!
诵读小贴士:数一数,范文正好八句话。背熟这个框架,考试时把季节、爱好、活动换成自己的内容,五分钟就能写完一篇。