🔤 小学英语五年级下英语写话十练 第10练书面表达期末复习综合写作

第10练 期末:八句话小短文

期末书面表达来了!这一练把整学期学的作息、季节、月份、进行时串成一个"八句话"写作框架,任何题目都能套着写出一篇完整小短文。

难度:★★★★★

情景导入

💡情景导入 · 期末写话不用怕

期末考试的书面表达题通常是:以 My Happy Life 或 A Day in Spring 为题,写一篇不少于五句话的小短文。

很多同学一看到空白格子就发懵。别怕!这一练教你一个"八句话框架":开头 1 句 + 中间 6 句 + 结尾 1 句。把前九练学过的句型往里一放,一篇完整的短文就成了。

核心词汇

📚核心词汇 Word Bank
单词/短语意思例句
happy life快乐生活I have a happy life.
every day每天I read English every day.
after class课后I play ping-pong after class.
with my family和家人一起I go hiking with my family.
at school在学校I study hard at school.
wonderful精彩的What a wonderful day!

句型与语法

🧩语法讲解 · 八句话写作框架

第 1 句 · 开头亮身份:I am a student in Hangzhou. / My name is...

第 2-7 句 · 中间六句(每练贡献一句)

  • 作息(第1练):I usually get up at 6:30.
  • 季节(第2练):My favourite season is spring.
  • 月份(第3练):My birthday is in May.
  • 周末(第7练):On the weekend, I often ride a bike with my family.
  • 进行时(第6练):Look! My cat is sleeping on my bed.
  • 爱好(第9练):My hobby is drawing.

第 8 句 · 结尾抒感受:I have a happy life! / I love my school and my city!

检查三步:句首大写了吗?句号写了吗?动词形式对了吗?

听说训练

💬听说训练 · 开口说
  • A: The final exam is coming. Are you ready for writing? (期末考试快到了,写话你准备好了吗?)
  • B: Yes! I have a magic plan: eight sentences. (准备好了!我有个妙招:八句话。)
  • A: Eight sentences? Tell me more. (八句话?说来听听。)
  • B: One sentence for the beginning, six for my life, and one for my feeling. (开头一句,中间六句写生活,结尾一句写感受。)
  • A: That's smart! Let's practise together. (真聪明!我们一起练练吧。)
  • B: OK! I am a student in Hangzhou... (好!我是一名杭州的学生……)

易错点

⚠️难点 · 易错点
  1. 时态别打架:日常习惯用一般现在时,"看!正在……"才用 be doing,一篇短文里别乱切换。
  2. 句子要完整:Get up at 6:30. ❌(缺主语)→ I get up at 6:30. ✅
  3. 别逐字翻译中文:我很喜欢我的生活 → I very like my life ❌ → I like my life very much

考点

🎯考点提示
  • 书面表达:期末综合写话(My Happy Life / My School Life 等题目通用);
  • 一般现在时与现在进行时的正确选用;
  • 开头—中间—结尾的三段式结构,句首大写与标点规范。

诵读 Read Aloud

🎙️范文诵读 · My Happy Life(建议背诵)

I am a student in Hangzhou. I usually get up at 6:30 and go to school at 7:20. My favourite season is spring, because the West Lake is very beautiful. My birthday is in May, and I always have a small party. On the weekend, I often ride a bike with my family along the Grand Canal. My hobby is drawing, and I draw every day. Look! My cat is sleeping beside my desk now. I have a happy life!

诵读小贴士:数一数,范文正好八句话。背熟这个框架,考试时把季节、爱好、活动换成自己的内容,五分钟就能写完一篇。

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