🔤 小学英语五年级上英语写话十练 第10练书面表达期末综合

第10练 期末:八句话小短文

期末书面表达要求写一段八句左右的小短文,怎么把一学期学的句型串起来?这一练给你一张万能框架图,考场上照着搭就行。

难度:★★★★★

情景导入

💡情景导入 · 期末书面表达来了

期末考试的书面表达题通常是这样的:以 My Life(我的生活)为题,写一段不少于八句话的短文,可以写自己、老师、一周安排、会做的事和你的房间。

别慌!这正好是前九练的大集合:第1练教你写人,第2练写一周,第4练写本领,第5练写房间……这一练,我们把它们拼成一篇完整的八句话小短文。

核心词汇

📚核心词汇 Word Bank
单词/短语意思例句
primary school小学I'm in a primary school.
helpful乐于助人的My friend is helpful.
often / sometimes经常 / 有时I often play sports.
tidy整洁的My room is tidy.
enjoy享受;喜爱I enjoy my school life.
dream梦想I have a big dream.

句型与语法

🧩语法讲解 · 八句话万能框架

期末小短文的"八句话框架",每句用一个学过的句型:

  1. 开头两句:介绍自己——I'm Li Hua. I'm a student in Hangzhou.
  2. 写人一句:My English teacher is kind and funny. (第1练)
  3. 一周一句:I have PE on Wednesdays. (第2练)
  4. 本领一句:I can swim and play the pipa. (第4练)
  5. 房间一句:There is a big bookshelf in my room. (第5练)
  6. 结尾两句:感受 + 愿望——I enjoy my life. I want to learn more next year.

检查口诀:一看大写和句号,二看 be 动词和三单 s,三数一数够不够八句。

听说训练

💬听说训练 · 开口说
  • A: The final exam is coming. Are you ready for the writing? (期末考快到了,写话准备好了吗?)
  • B: Yes! I can write about my teacher, my week and my room. (准备好了!我会写老师、一周和房间。)
  • A: How many sentences do you need? (要写几句?)
  • B: About eight sentences. I check the capital letters at the end. (大约八句,写完我会检查大写。)

易错点

⚠️难点 · 易错点
  1. 句首大写、句末句号别丢:写得快最容易丢,交卷前一定回头检查一遍。
  2. 句型别互相打架:There is have a desk. ❌ → There is a desk. ✅(there be 和 have 只能选一个)
  3. 凑句数别重复:I like English. I like English very much. 算重复 ❌ → 换成一句 can 或 there be 句型 ✅

考点

🎯考点提示
  • 书面表达:综合运用本学期句型完成不少于八句的短文(期末压轴题);
  • What's he like、on + 星期、can、there be 四大句型混合使用;
  • 卷面规范:大写、标点、单词间距,写完通读检查。

诵读 Read Aloud

🎙️范文诵读 · My Life(建议背诵)

Hello! I'm Li Hua. I'm a student in a primary school in Hangzhou. My English teacher, Miss Wang, is kind and funny. I have my favourite PE class on Wednesdays. On the weekend, I often read books and play football. I can swim and play the pipa, too. In my room, there is a big bookshelf with many books. I enjoy my life, and I want to learn more next year!

诵读小贴士:这篇范文正好八句,每句来自一个学过的句型。背熟框架,考场上换成自己的信息就是满分作文。

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