情景导入
💡情景导入 · 给笔友介绍西湖
英国笔友 Amy 收到你寄去的西湖明信片，兴奋地问："What can you see near your city?"
看着明信片上的画面：湖面上有几只游船，湖边是一排垂柳，远处是断桥和宝石山，天上还有小鸟飞过。看图写话的秘诀就是——按顺序看，按顺序写：先整体，再湖上、湖边、远处，一处一句。
核心词汇
📚核心词汇 Word Bank
| 单词/短语 | 意思 | 例句 |
|---|---|---|
| the West Lake | 西湖 | The West Lake is in Hangzhou. |
| boat | 小船；游船 | There are some boats on the lake. |
| willow tree | 柳树 | The willow trees are green. |
| Broken Bridge | 断桥 | You can see the Broken Bridge. |
| take photos | 拍照 | Many people are taking photos. |
| famous | 著名的 | The West Lake is famous. |
句型与语法
🧩语法讲解 · 看图写话四看法
拿到一张图，按"四看"来写：
- 一看整体：This is the beautiful West Lake in Hangzhou. （这是哪里）
- 二看湖上：There are some boats on the lake. （图中间有什么）
- 三看湖边和远处：There are many willow trees near the lake. You can see the Broken Bridge, too. （周围有什么）
- 四写人和感受：People are taking photos. I love the West Lake! （人在做什么 + 感受）
加分句：You can see... （你可以看到……）是看图写话的万能句型。
听说训练
💬听说训练 · 开口说
- A: What can you see in the picture? （图上你能看到什么？）
- B: I can see a lake, some boats and many trees. （我能看到湖、几只船和许多树。）
- A: Where is it? （这是哪里？）
- B: It's the West Lake in Hangzhou. It's very famous. （是杭州西湖，非常有名。）
易错点
⚠️难点 · 易错点
- West Lake 前要加 the 且大写：west lake ❌ → the West Lake ✅
- on the lake 表示在湖面上：in the lake 是"在湖水里"，船在湖面上要用 on the lake。
- 别东一句西一句：写完湖上又跳回天空再回湖上 ❌ → 按"整体—湖上—湖边—远处"一条线写 ✅
考点
🎯考点提示
- 书面表达：看图描写景物（看图写话是五上期末书面表达常见题型）；
- there be 与 You can see... 两大写景句型的搭配使用；
- 专有名词 the West Lake、Hangzhou 的大写与拼写。
诵读 Read Aloud
🎙️范文诵读 · The West Lake（建议背诵）
Look at the picture! This is the West Lake in Hangzhou. It is very famous. There are some boats on the lake. Near the lake, there are many green willow trees. You can see the Broken Bridge and the hills, too. Many people are walking and taking photos. The West Lake is like a beautiful picture. Welcome to Hangzhou!
诵读小贴士：结尾一句 Welcome to Hangzhou! 把写景变成了热情的邀请，是介绍家乡类作文的漂亮收尾。