🔤 小学英语五年级上英语写话十练 第1练书面表达人物描写

第1练 My Teacher 我的老师

新学期换了新老师,怎么用英语向朋友介绍他?这一练教你用外貌加性格两条线,把老师写成一段有模有样的英文小短文。

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情景导入

💡情景导入 · 我们的新老师

开学第一天,班里来了一位新英语老师。放学后,你在杭州的表哥发来消息问:"你们新老师是什么样的?"

用中文说很容易,用英语怎么介绍呢?其实只要抓住两条线——长什么样(外貌)和是什么样的人(性格),再加一句你的感受,一段介绍老师的英文写话就完成了。

核心词汇

📚核心词汇 Word Bank
单词/短语意思例句
young / old年轻的 / 年长的Our teacher is young.
tall / short高的 / 矮的He is tall and thin.
kind和蔼的Miss Wang is very kind.
funny风趣的He is funny. We all like him.
strict严格的She is strict but nice.
hard-working勤奋的Our teacher is hard-working.

句型与语法

🧩语法讲解 · 介绍人物三步走

写"我的老师",记住"三步走":

  1. 是谁:Mr Li is our English teacher. (李老师是我们的英语老师)
  2. 什么样:He is tall and young. He is kind and funny. (外貌一句 + 性格一句)
  3. 我的感受:We all like him very much. (我们都很喜欢他)

注意:介绍男老师用 he / his,女老师用 she / her,写之前先想清楚,通篇不能混。

听说训练

💬听说训练 · 开口说
  • A: Do you have new teachers? (你们有新老师吗?)
  • B: Yes. We have a new English teacher, Mr Li. (有,新英语老师李老师。)
  • A: What's he like? (他是什么样的?)
  • B: He is tall and thin. He is very funny and kind. (他又高又瘦,风趣又和蔼。)

易错点

⚠️难点 · 易错点
  1. he 和 she 不能混:介绍女老师写着写着变成 he ❌ → 通篇统一用 she
  2. be 动词别丢:He tall. ❌ → He is tall. ✅
  3. strict 不等于凶:She is strict, but she is kind. 严格和和蔼可以同时写,人物更真实。

考点

🎯考点提示
  • 书面表达:介绍一位老师或家人(What's he/she like 是五上第一单元核心话题);
  • 形容词 kind、funny、strict、hard-working 的正确拼写与使用;
  • he/she、his/her 前后一致,be 动词不遗漏。

诵读 Read Aloud

🎙️范文诵读 · My Teacher(建议背诵)

Mr Li is our new English teacher. He is from Hangzhou. He is tall and thin. He is young and funny. In class, he is a little strict, but after class, he is very kind. He often plays games with us. We all like him very much.

诵读小贴士:把 Mr Li 换成你自己老师的姓,再挑两个最像他(她)的形容词,就是你自己的作文。

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