🔤 小学英语四年级下英语写话十练 第10练书面表达期末复习综合运用

第10练 期末:六句话小短文

期末冲刺!把本学期学过的学校、时间、天气、衣服、购物、季节全串起来,用一个"六句话公式"轻松写出一篇结构完整的英文小短文。

难度:★★★★★

情景导入

💡情景导入 · 期末写话大挑战

期末英语试卷的最后一题写着:以 My Happy Day 为题,写一篇不少于 6 句话的短文。

别怕!这学期我们学过的内容其实就是六块积木:时间(What time)、天气(Weather)、地点(School / Farm)、衣服(Clothes)、购物(Shopping)、季节(Season)。挑几块搭起来,六句话小短文就完成了。

核心词汇

📚核心词汇 Word Bank
单词/短语意思例句
happy day开心的一天What a happy day!
get up起床I get up at seven o'clock.
weather天气The weather is sunny.
wear穿着I wear my T-shirt and shorts.
go shopping去购物We go shopping in the afternoon.
with和……一起I go to the park with Mum.
first / then / finally首先 / 然后 / 最后First, I get up early.

句型与语法

🧩语法讲解 · 六句话写作公式

期末写话万能"六句话公式",每句一个任务:

  1. 时间:It's Sunday. I get up at seven o'clock.
  2. 天气:It's sunny and warm.
  3. 穿着:I wear my white T-shirt and blue shorts.
  4. 去哪里:I go to the West Lake with my parents by subway.
  5. 做什么:We fly kites and take photos.
  6. 感受收尾:What a happy day!

连接词加分:句子之间用 first、then、finally 串起来,条理立刻清晰。

听说训练

💬听说训练 · 开口说
  • A: The exam is coming. How do you write a short passage? (快考试了,短文怎么写呀?)
  • B: It's easy! First, write the time and weather. (很简单!先写时间和天气。)
  • A: Then what? (然后呢?)
  • B: Then write where you go and what you do. (再写去哪里、做什么。)
  • A: And finally? (最后呢?)
  • B: Finally, write your feeling: What a happy day! (最后写感受:多开心的一天!)

易错点

⚠️难点 · 易错点
  1. 每句都要有主语和动词:Sunny today ❌ → It's sunny today ✅
  2. 动词别堆在一起:I go shopping buy a cap ❌ → I go shopping and buy a cap ✅
  3. 句号、大写别马虎:句首字母大写、句末加句号,卷面分不能丢。

考点

🎯考点提示
  • 书面表达:期末 6 句话短文(覆盖时间、天气、衣着、活动等多个话题);
  • 连接词 first、then、finally 的使用;
  • 综合检验本学期句型:It's time to... / It's sunny. / I wear... / How much...

诵读 Read Aloud

🎙️范文诵读 · My Happy Day(建议背诵)

It's Sunday. I get up at seven o'clock. The weather is sunny and warm. I wear my white T-shirt and blue shorts. First, I go to the West Lake with my parents by subway. We fly kites on the grass. Then we go shopping. Mum buys me a yellow cap. It's twenty yuan. Finally, we go home at five o'clock. What a happy day!

诵读小贴士:这篇范文正好用了"六句话公式"再加两句购物细节。背熟它,期末任何"一天"类作文都能套用。

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