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第9练 杭州的春天(看图写话)

一幅"西湖春景图"摆在眼前:断桥、柳树、风筝、游船……这一练教你按"整体到局部"的顺序看图,把杭州的春天写成一篇美美的英文短文。

难度:★★★★★

情景导入

💡情景导入 · 一幅西湖春景图

英语试卷上出现了一幅图:西湖边,柳树发芽,桃花盛开,几个孩子在草地上放风筝,湖面上有一只小船,远处是宝石山。题目要求:看图写 5 句以上的英文短文。

看图写话别慌,先问自己三个问题:图上是什么季节?有哪些景物?人们在做什么? 答案连起来,就是一篇《杭州的春天》。

核心词汇

📚核心词汇 Word Bank
单词/短语意思例句
the West Lake西湖The West Lake is in Hangzhou.
willow柳树The willows are green.
peach flower桃花The peach flowers are pink.
boat小船There is a boat on the lake.
fly kites放风筝The children are flying kites.
grass草地The grass is green.
by the lake在湖边We walk by the lake.

句型与语法

🧩语法讲解 · 看图写话的三层顺序

看图写话按"三层"来写,条理最清楚:

  1. 第一层·点明时间地点:It's spring. This is the West Lake in Hangzhou. (春天,杭州西湖。)
  2. 第二层·描写景物(用 There be 和形容词):There are many green willows by the lake. The peach flowers are pink. (湖边柳绿,桃花粉红。)
  3. 第三层·描写人物活动(用现在进行时):The children are flying kites. A boat is going on the lake. (孩子们正在放风筝,小船正在湖上行驶。)

最后加一句感受收尾:How beautiful the spring is!

听说训练

💬听说训练 · 开口说
  • A: Look at this picture. What season is it? (看这幅图,是什么季节?)
  • B: It's spring. The willows are green. (是春天,柳树绿了。)
  • A: Where is it? (这是哪里?)
  • B: It's the West Lake in Hangzhou. (是杭州西湖。)
  • A: What are the children doing? (孩子们在做什么?)
  • B: They are flying kites on the grass. (他们正在草地上放风筝。)

易错点

⚠️难点 · 易错点
  1. 图中正在发生的动作用现在进行时:The children fly kites ❌(看图时)→ The children are flying kites ✅
  2. West Lake 前要加 the:I go to West Lake ❌ → I go to the West Lake ✅
  3. 景物描写别忘形容词:There are willows(干巴巴)→ There are many green willows(更生动)✅

考点

🎯考点提示
  • 书面表达:看图写 5 句以上短文(四下期末看图写话高频题型);
  • There be 句型写景物 + 现在进行时写人物活动的组合;
  • 按"时间地点 → 景物 → 人物 → 感受"的顺序组织短文。

诵读 Read Aloud

🎙️范文诵读 · Spring in Hangzhou(建议背诵)

It's spring in Hangzhou. The weather is warm and sunny. Look at the West Lake! The willows are green and the peach flowers are pink. There is a small boat on the lake. On the grass, the children are flying kites. Some people are drinking Longjing tea by the lake. How beautiful the spring in Hangzhou is!

诵读小贴士:范文的镜头从"天气"拉到"湖面",再到"草地上的人",由远及近。看图写话时也让你的"镜头"这样移动。

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