🔤 小学英语四年级上英语写话十练(陆续上线)书面表达期末复习小短文

第10练 期末:六句话小短文

期末大挑战来啦!把这学期学过的教室、朋友、家庭、晚餐全都用上,按照开头、中间、结尾的框架,写出一篇完整的六句话英语小短文,为四年级上册画上圆满句号。

难度:★★★★★

情景导入

💡情景导入 · 期末写话大挑战

学期快结束了,英语老师宣布期末写话题目:"About Me(关于我)——请用六句话介绍你自己、你的家和你的朋友。"

六句话听起来不少?其实前面九练学过的句型就是九块"积木":I have、There is、He is a、I'd like……挑六块搭起来,一篇小短文就成了!

核心词汇

📚核心词汇 Word Bank
单词/短语意思例句
years old……岁I am ten years old.
family家庭There are three people in my family.
favourite最喜欢的My favourite food is noodles.
like doing喜欢做……I like playing games.
together一起We often read books together.
happy快乐的I am a happy boy.
loveI love my family.

句型与语法

🧩语法讲解 · 六句话搭积木

六句话小短文的"万能框架",一句一块积木:

  1. 开头 1 句·自我介绍:Hello! My name is Li Ming. I am ten years old.
  2. 中间 4 句·每句一个话题:
    • 家庭:There are four people in my family.
    • 职业:My father is a doctor and my mother is a teacher.
    • 朋友:I have a good friend. She is friendly.
    • 爱好或食物:My favourite food is noodles.
  3. 结尾 1 句·表达感受:I am a happy boy. / I love my family!

检查口诀:每句开头大写、结尾有标点,he/she 后面动词要变化。

听说训练

💬听说训练 · 开口说
  • A: The exam is coming. How do you write About Me? (要考试啦,"关于我"你怎么写?)
  • B: It's easy! First, I write my name and age. (很简单!先写名字和年龄。)
  • A: Then what? (然后呢?)
  • B: Then my family, my friend and my favourite food. At last, one happy sentence: I love my family! (然后写家庭、朋友和最爱的食物,最后来一句开心的:我爱我家!)

易错点

⚠️难点 · 易错点
  1. 每句开头要大写:my name is Li Ming ❌ → My name is Li Ming ✅
  2. 年龄表达:I am ten years ❌ → I am ten years old ✅(也可以只说 I am ten)
  3. 句号不能丢:六句话要有六个标点,写完从头数一遍;
  4. 别整篇只用 I:中间换成 My father / My friend / She 开头,短文才不单调。

考点

🎯考点提示
  • 期末书面表达:About Me / My Family and Friends 类综合小短文;
  • 综合运用本册句型:I have、There is/are、He/She is a + 职业、I'd like、It has;
  • 开头—中间—结尾的三段式结构意识;
  • 大小写、标点等书写规范(期末评分的重点)。

诵读 Read Aloud

🎙️范文诵读 · About Me(建议背诵)

Hello! My name is Li Ming and I am ten years old. There are four people in my family: my parents, my baby sister and me. My father is a doctor and my mother is a teacher. I have a good friend. Her name is Amy and she is very friendly. My favourite food is noodles. I am a happy boy and I love my family!

诵读小贴士:把范文六句话编成 1 到 6 号,每天背一句并换成自己的信息,考前你就有一篇"私人订制"范文了。

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