🔤 小学英语四年级上英语写话十练(陆续上线)书面表达校园生活顺序词

第8练 My School Day 校园一日

从早上到教室,到上课、游戏、放学回家,你的一天是怎么度过的?这一练教你用 first、then、after school 三个顺序词,把校园一日像串珠子一样连成一篇小短文。

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情景导入

💡情景导入 · 忙碌又快乐的一天

远方的笔友 Mike 来信问你:"What do you do at school every day?"(你每天在学校都做些什么?)

早上读书、上英语课、和朋友玩游戏、放学后打扫教室……事情这么多,怎么写才不乱?秘诀是用"顺序词"把一天串起来。这一练就学写"校园一日"。

核心词汇

📚核心词汇 Word Bank
单词/短语意思例句
go to school上学I go to school at seven.
have classes上课We have four classes in the morning.
read books读书I read books in the library.
play games玩游戏We play games with friends.
clean the classroom打扫教室We clean the classroom together.
after school放学后After school, I go home.
go home回家I go home at five.

句型与语法

🧩语法讲解 · 顺序词串起一天

写"一天",就像串珠子,顺序词是那根线:

  1. In the morning(早上):In the morning, I go to school and read books.
  2. First ... Then ...(先……然后……):First, we have an English class. Then we play games.
  3. After school(放学后):After school, we clean the classroom.

动词短语是珠子:go to school、have classes、play games、go home——每颗珠子配一个顺序词,短文就条理清楚。

听说训练

💬听说训练 · 开口说
  • A: What do you do at school, Mike? (Mike,你在学校都做什么?)
  • B: In the morning, we have four classes. (早上我们上四节课。)
  • A: What about the afternoon? (下午呢?)
  • B: We play games first, then we clean the classroom. After school, I go home. (我们先玩游戏,然后打扫教室。放学后我就回家。)

易错点

⚠️难点 · 易错点
  1. "上课"别直译:up class ❌ → have classes
  2. after school 后加逗号再写句子:After school I go home 建议写成 After school, I go home. 更规范;
  3. go home 不加 to:go to home ❌ → go home ✅(home 前不用 to)。

考点

🎯考点提示
  • 书面表达:描写校园的一天(四年级综合写话常考题);
  • 顺序词 first / then / after school 的使用;
  • 常用动词短语:go to school、have classes、read books、play games、go home;
  • 时间短语 in the morning / in the afternoon 的位置。

诵读 Read Aloud

🎙️范文诵读 · My School Day(建议背诵)

I have a happy school day. In the morning, I go to school at seven. First, we read books. Then we have four classes. I like the English class best. In the afternoon, we play games on the playground. After school, we clean the classroom. Then I go home at five. What a nice day!

诵读小贴士:按"早上 → 上午 → 下午 → 放学后"四格填空,每格写一件你真实做的事,一天就写完整了。

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