🔤 小学英语四年级上英语写话十练(陆续上线)书面表达朋友外貌描写

第3练 My Friend 我的朋友

你最好的朋友长什么样?高高的、戴眼镜,还是有一头短短的黑发?这一练教你用 He/She has 和 He/She is 两个句型,从外貌写到性格,介绍你的好朋友。

难度:★★★★★

情景导入

💡情景导入 · 猜猜他是谁

课间游戏时间!老师说:"I have a good friend. He is tall and strong. He has short black hair. Who is he?"(我有一个好朋友,他又高又壮,留着黑色短发,他是谁?)

大家七嘴八舌地猜了起来。原来,把朋友的样子和性格说清楚,别人就能猜出来!这一练我们就学写"我的朋友"。

核心词汇

📚核心词汇 Word Bank
单词/短语意思例句
friend朋友I have a good friend.
hair头发She has long hair.
glasses眼镜He has glasses.
tall高的My friend is tall.
strong强壮的He is tall and strong.
friendly友好的She is very friendly.
quiet安静的He is quiet.

句型与语法

🧩语法讲解 · has 写外貌,is 写性格

写朋友,两个句型分工明确:

  1. He / She has ...(他/她有……)→ 写外貌:She has long brown hair. / He has glasses.
  2. He / She is ...(他/她是……)→ 写性格和高矮:He is tall and strong. / She is friendly and quiet.

注意:主语是 he / she 时,have 要变成 has

升级句:结尾加一句 We often play together.(我们经常一起玩),短文更完整。

听说训练

💬听说训练 · 开口说
  • A: I have a good friend. Guess! Who is she? (我有一个好朋友,猜猜她是谁?)
  • B: Is she quiet? (她文静吗?)
  • A: No, she's very friendly. She has short hair and big eyes. (不,她很友好。她留短发,眼睛大大的。)
  • B: I know! She is Chen Jie! (我知道了!她是陈杰!)

易错点

⚠️难点 · 易错点
  1. he/she 后用 has:She have long hair ❌ → She has long hair ✅
  2. friendly 不是"朋友":friendly 是形容词"友好的","朋友"是 friend;
  3. hair 不加 -s:She has long hairs ❌ → She has long hair ✅(头发整体不可数)。

考点

🎯考点提示
  • 书面表达:介绍好朋友(四上 Unit 3 高频写话题,也常考"看图猜人");
  • have / has 的选择:I/you/we 用 have,he/she 用 has;
  • 外貌形容词搭配:long/short hair、big eyes、tall、strong;
  • 性格形容词:friendly、quiet、funny。

诵读 Read Aloud

🎙️范文诵读 · My Friend(建议背诵)

I have a good friend. His name is Zhang Peng. He is tall and strong. He has short black hair and big eyes. He has glasses, too. He is friendly and funny. We often play football together. I like my friend!

诵读小贴士:先想好写谁,再按"名字 → 外貌 → 性格 → 我们常做的事"的顺序,一句句替换成你朋友的特点。

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