🔤 小学英语六年级下毕业专题书面表达毕业小升初写话

毕业书面表达 · 告别与感谢

毕业季到了!用英语给老师写感谢卡、给同学写留言、写一篇 My Primary School Life——把六年的美好,装进几句真诚的英文里。

难度:★★★★

情景导入

💡情景导入 · 毕业纪念册上的英文留言

毕业纪念册传到了小雨手上,前一页是同桌浩浩写的英文留言:

"Dear Xiaoyu, thank you for helping me with my maths. You are my best friend. I will miss you! (谢谢你帮我学数学。你是我最好的朋友,我会想你的!)"

小雨很感动,也想用英语写点什么——给老师的感谢、给同学的祝福、对小学六年的回忆……

毕业书面表达是小升初英语的高频考题,也是最"走心"的一篇作文。这一课教你三种毕业写话:感谢卡、留言条、毕业作文

核心词汇

📚核心词汇 Word Bank

毕业主题词汇

单词/短语意思例句
graduate毕业We are going to graduate soon.
graduation毕业(名词)The graduation party is in June.
memory(复数 memories)回忆I have many happy memories.
miss想念I will miss my teachers.
thank you for...因……而感谢Thank you for your help.
keep in touch保持联系Let's keep in touch!
good luck祝好运Good luck in your new school!
forever永远We are friends forever.

回忆校园生活词汇

短语意思例句
sports meeting运动会I won a race at the sports meeting.
school trip春游/秋游We went on a school trip to the West Lake.
art festival艺术节She sang at the art festival.
make friends交朋友I made many good friends here.

句型与语法

🧩语法讲解 · 毕业写话三大模板

模板一:感谢卡(To my teacher)

  1. 称呼:Dear Ms Wang, / Dear Mr Li,
  2. 感谢:Thank you for teaching us for six years. (thank you for + 名词/动词-ing)
  3. 回忆:You told us many interesting stories. (用过去时)
  4. 祝福:I wish you happiness and good health! (wish + 人 + 祝福内容)
  5. 落款:Yours, Xiaoyu

模板二:同学留言(To my friend)

  • You are my best friend. We played together and studied together.
  • I will miss you. / I will never forget our friendship. (will 表将来)
  • Good luck in your new school! Let's keep in touch!

模板三:毕业作文 My Primary School Life(三段式)

段落内容时态
开头六年过去了,我要毕业了现在时 / be going to
中间回忆两三件难忘的事(运动会、春游、好朋友)过去时
结尾感谢 + 展望初中生活will / be going to

万能句备用:Time flies! (时光飞逝)/ How time flies! (时间过得真快啊!)——开头结尾都好用。

听说训练

💬听说训练 · 开口说

毕业采访(拿着"话筒"互相采访):

  • A: What will you miss most about our school? (你最想念学校的什么?)
  • B: I will miss my teachers and friends. And the delicious food in the dining hall! (老师和朋友,还有食堂的美食!)
  • A: What was your happiest memory? (你最快乐的回忆是什么?)
  • B: The school trip last spring. We went boating on the West Lake. (去年春天的春游,我们在西湖划船。)

祝福接龙:每人对同学说一句英文祝福——Good luck! / Keep in touch! / I wish you success! / Friends forever!

辨析对比

⚖️易混辨析 · 毕业写话的时态分工
  • 回忆过去用过去时:We went on a school trip. / I made many friends.
  • 表达现状用现在时:I am happy in this school. / You are my best friend.
  • 展望未来用 will / be going to:I will miss you. / I am going to study in a new school.
  • 一篇毕业作文往往三种时态都用到——每写一句,先想清楚这件事是过去、现在还是将来
  • miss 的两副面孔:I miss you.(想念)/ I missed the bus.(错过)——毕业留言里是"想念"。

文化角

🌍文化角 Culture Corner

英语国家的小学毕业也很有仪式感:美国孩子有 yearbook(毕业纪念册),大家互相签名留言,最常写的就是 H.A.G.S.——Have A Great Summer(暑假愉快)的缩写!英国学校流行在毕业衫上让全班签名留念。

毕业留言的经典英文金句:Shoot for the moon. Even if you miss, you'll land among the stars.(向月亮出发吧,即使错过,你也会降落在星星之间。)——把它写进你的纪念册吧!

易错点

⚠️难点 · 易错点
  1. thank you for 后接动词原形:Thank you for teach us. ❌ → Thank you for teaching us. ✅(for 是介词,后接 -ing)
  2. will 后动词加 s 或 -ed:I will missed you. ❌ → I will miss you. ✅(will 后接原形)
  3. 回忆往事用了现在时:Last year we go to the park. ❌ → Last year we went to the park. ✅
  4. 书信格式丢三落四:Dear... 后要有逗号,结尾 Yours, 后另起一行签名——格式分白丢最可惜。

考点

🎯考点提示
  • 书面表达 My Primary School Life / A Letter to My Teacher(小升初写话最高频的毕业题);
  • thank you for + doing 结构(单选与写作通用考点);
  • will + 动词原形表将来(I will miss... 句型);
  • 英文书信/贺卡格式:称呼、正文、祝福语、落款四要素;
  • 写作评分三要素:时态正确、句子完整、卷面整洁——考前用"三查法"检查(查时态、查三单、查拼写)。

诵读 Read Aloud

🎙️短文诵读 · Goodbye, My Primary School(建议背诵)

Part 1 · 毕业范文(考试可直接套用)

How time flies! I'm going to graduate from primary school soon. I have studied here for six years. I made many good friends. I remember the sports meeting——I won a race and everyone cheered for me. I remember the school trip to the West Lake. We sang songs on the boat. Thank you, my dear teachers and friends. I will miss you all. I'm going to study harder in middle school. Goodbye, my primary school!

Part 2 · 给老师的感谢卡

Dear Ms Wang, thank you for teaching us for six years. Your classes were interesting. You helped me when I was in trouble. You are like a mother to us. I wish you happiness and good health. I will come back to see you! Yours, Xiaoyu

Part 3 · 祝福快读

Good luck, good luck, good luck to you! Keep in touch, and don't feel blue. We are friends, friends forever. Happy graduation to me and you!

诵读小贴士:Part 1 是标准的三段式毕业作文(现在 → 过去回忆 → 将来展望),背熟后考场上换掉画线细节就是你自己的作文;Part 2 注意书信格式的每一个标点。

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