情景导入
毕业纪念册传到了小雨手上,前一页是同桌浩浩写的英文留言:
"Dear Xiaoyu, thank you for helping me with my maths. You are my best friend. I will miss you! (谢谢你帮我学数学。你是我最好的朋友,我会想你的!)"
小雨很感动,也想用英语写点什么——给老师的感谢、给同学的祝福、对小学六年的回忆……
毕业书面表达是小升初英语的高频考题,也是最"走心"的一篇作文。这一课教你三种毕业写话:感谢卡、留言条、毕业作文。
核心词汇
毕业主题词汇:
| 单词/短语 | 意思 | 例句 |
|---|---|---|
| graduate | 毕业 | We are going to graduate soon. |
| graduation | 毕业(名词) | The graduation party is in June. |
| memory(复数 memories) | 回忆 | I have many happy memories. |
| miss | 想念 | I will miss my teachers. |
| thank you for... | 因……而感谢 | Thank you for your help. |
| keep in touch | 保持联系 | Let's keep in touch! |
| good luck | 祝好运 | Good luck in your new school! |
| forever | 永远 | We are friends forever. |
回忆校园生活词汇:
| 短语 | 意思 | 例句 |
|---|---|---|
| sports meeting | 运动会 | I won a race at the sports meeting. |
| school trip | 春游/秋游 | We went on a school trip to the West Lake. |
| art festival | 艺术节 | She sang at the art festival. |
| make friends | 交朋友 | I made many good friends here. |
句型与语法
模板一:感谢卡(To my teacher)
- 称呼:Dear Ms Wang, / Dear Mr Li,
- 感谢:Thank you for teaching us for six years. (thank you for + 名词/动词-ing)
- 回忆:You told us many interesting stories. (用过去时)
- 祝福:I wish you happiness and good health! (wish + 人 + 祝福内容)
- 落款:Yours, Xiaoyu
模板二:同学留言(To my friend)
- You are my best friend. We played together and studied together.
- I will miss you. / I will never forget our friendship. (will 表将来)
- Good luck in your new school! Let's keep in touch!
模板三:毕业作文 My Primary School Life(三段式)
| 段落 | 内容 | 时态 |
|---|---|---|
| 开头 | 六年过去了,我要毕业了 | 现在时 / be going to |
| 中间 | 回忆两三件难忘的事(运动会、春游、好朋友) | 过去时 |
| 结尾 | 感谢 + 展望初中生活 | will / be going to |
万能句备用:Time flies! (时光飞逝)/ How time flies! (时间过得真快啊!)——开头结尾都好用。
听说训练
毕业采访(拿着"话筒"互相采访):
- A: What will you miss most about our school? (你最想念学校的什么?)
- B: I will miss my teachers and friends. And the delicious food in the dining hall! (老师和朋友,还有食堂的美食!)
- A: What was your happiest memory? (你最快乐的回忆是什么?)
- B: The school trip last spring. We went boating on the West Lake. (去年春天的春游,我们在西湖划船。)
祝福接龙:每人对同学说一句英文祝福——Good luck! / Keep in touch! / I wish you success! / Friends forever!
辨析对比
- 回忆过去用过去时:We went on a school trip. / I made many friends.
- 表达现状用现在时:I am happy in this school. / You are my best friend.
- 展望未来用 will / be going to:I will miss you. / I am going to study in a new school.
- 一篇毕业作文往往三种时态都用到——每写一句,先想清楚这件事是过去、现在还是将来;
- miss 的两副面孔:I miss you.(想念)/ I missed the bus.(错过)——毕业留言里是"想念"。
文化角
英语国家的小学毕业也很有仪式感:美国孩子有 yearbook(毕业纪念册),大家互相签名留言,最常写的就是 H.A.G.S.——Have A Great Summer(暑假愉快)的缩写!英国学校流行在毕业衫上让全班签名留念。
毕业留言的经典英文金句:Shoot for the moon. Even if you miss, you'll land among the stars.(向月亮出发吧,即使错过,你也会降落在星星之间。)——把它写进你的纪念册吧!
易错点
- thank you for 后接动词原形:Thank you for teach us. ❌ → Thank you for teaching us. ✅(for 是介词,后接 -ing)
- will 后动词加 s 或 -ed:I will missed you. ❌ → I will miss you. ✅(will 后接原形)
- 回忆往事用了现在时:Last year we go to the park. ❌ → Last year we went to the park. ✅
- 书信格式丢三落四:Dear... 后要有逗号,结尾 Yours, 后另起一行签名——格式分白丢最可惜。
考点
- 书面表达 My Primary School Life / A Letter to My Teacher(小升初写话最高频的毕业题);
- thank you for + doing 结构(单选与写作通用考点);
- will + 动词原形表将来(I will miss... 句型);
- 英文书信/贺卡格式:称呼、正文、祝福语、落款四要素;
- 写作评分三要素:时态正确、句子完整、卷面整洁——考前用"三查法"检查(查时态、查三单、查拼写)。
诵读 Read Aloud
Part 1 · 毕业范文(考试可直接套用)
How time flies! I'm going to graduate from primary school soon. I have studied here for six years. I made many good friends. I remember the sports meeting——I won a race and everyone cheered for me. I remember the school trip to the West Lake. We sang songs on the boat. Thank you, my dear teachers and friends. I will miss you all. I'm going to study harder in middle school. Goodbye, my primary school!
Part 2 · 给老师的感谢卡
Dear Ms Wang, thank you for teaching us for six years. Your classes were interesting. You helped me when I was in trouble. You are like a mother to us. I wish you happiness and good health. I will come back to see you! Yours, Xiaoyu
Part 3 · 祝福快读
Good luck, good luck, good luck to you! Keep in touch, and don't feel blue. We are friends, friends forever. Happy graduation to me and you!
诵读小贴士:Part 1 是标准的三段式毕业作文(现在 → 过去回忆 → 将来展望),背熟后考场上换掉画线细节就是你自己的作文;Part 2 注意书信格式的每一个标点。