🔤 初中英语九年级全一册写作课十讲(陆续上线)书面表达通知中考实战

第8讲 中考实战:通知与应用文

通知是中考应用文里格式分最重的文体:标题、时间、地点、事项、落款,一样不能少。这一讲实战演练英文通知的五要素与"招募启事、活动通知"两大变体,把格式分稳稳收入囊中。

难度:★★★★

情景导入

💡情景导入 · 广播站的紧急任务

周一早晨,学生会老师找到小舟:"周五下午学校要在报告厅举办'英语文化节',请你写一份英文通知,中午前贴到公告栏。"

小舟提笔就写 Dear students...——等等,通知是"信"吗?要不要称呼?标题写什么?落款写谁?时间地点放在哪一段?其实通知(Notice)是中考应用文里格式要求最严格的文体:五个要素——标题、对象、时间地点、活动事项、落款——摆错一个都丢格式分。好消息是:它也是最"套路化"的文体,练熟一个模板,考场三分钟就能搭好架子。

核心词汇

📚核心词汇 Word Bank

通知类高频语块

功能常用表达
开场唤起注意May I have your attention, please? / Attention, please!
宣布活动An English party will be held in the hall.(活动将被举办——被动语态)
交代时间地点at 2:00 p.m. on Friday / in the school hall / on the playground
提出要求Everyone is expected to... / Please be on time. / sign up for(报名参加)

句型与结构

🧩写作讲解 · 英文通知五要素

通知的标准骨架

  1. 标题:居中写 NOTICE(全大写);
  2. 开头:一句话宣布活动——In order to enjoy English culture, our school will hold an English Festival.
  3. 主体:时间、地点、内容、要求,逐条交代清楚(信息缺一不可);
  4. 结尾:欢迎参加 + 期待——Everyone is welcome to join us!
  5. 落款:右下角写发布单位和日期——the Student Union, June 1st。

本讲核心句型

  • will be held 被动语态(通知的招牌句):The English Festival will be held in the school hall at 2:00 p.m. on Friday.
  • Those who... 定语从句Those who want to join the show, please sign up before Wednesday.(想参加演出的同学请周三前报名)以及 be expected to:Everyone is expected to arrive on time.(请大家准时到场。)

两大常考变体:活动通知(写清时间地点内容)与招募启事(多一段"报名条件 + 报名方式")——骨架相同,只换主体内容。

提分句型升级:You can learn a lot. → Not only can you enjoy wonderful shows, but you can also make friends with English lovers.(倒装 + 并列,通知结尾的吸睛句)

听说训练

💬听说训练 · 开口说

写前口头操练(先说顺再下笔):

  • May I have your attention, please? (请大家注意。)
  • The English Festival will be held at 2:00 p.m. on Friday. (英语文化节将于周五下午两点举行。)
  • Everyone is welcome to join us! (欢迎大家参加!)

辨析对比

⚖️格式对比 · 通知 vs 书信
通知 NOTICE书信/邮件
标题居中大写 NOTICE无标题
称呼无(或 Boys and girls,)Dear Tom,
人称多用第三人称/被动语态第一、第二人称为主
落款单位 + 日期(右下角)Yours, + 姓名

文化角

🌍文化角 Culture Corner

英文公告栏文化里,NOTICE 与 ANNOUNCEMENT 都表"通知",校园场景多用 NOTICE。英语通知讲究 KISS 原则——Keep It Short and Simple(简短明了):西方学校的公告往往只有五六句话,时间地点用黑体突出。这和中文通知的"兹定于……特此通知"一样,都是高度程式化的语言——程式化不是缺点,而是让读者三秒抓住关键信息的设计。

易错点

⚠️难点 · 易错点
  1. 信息四要素缺漏:时间、地点、活动、要求——写完对着题目逐项打勾,漏一项扣一项的分。
  2. 时间地点介词错at 2:00 p.m. on Friday in the school hall——时刻用 at,日期用 on,场馆用 in,三个介词各就各位。
  3. 该被动不被动:We will hold a party. 不算错,但通知的正式感来自被动——A party will be held...;主语是活动,不是"我们"。另外落款是发布单位 + 日期,写成 Yours, Li Hua 就"串台"成书信了。

中考真题

真题2024 · 浙江杭州中考(改编)

假如你是学生会主席李华,你校将举办"英语文化节"活动,请用英文写一份通知,内容包括:

  1. 活动时间与地点(周五下午 2 点,学校报告厅);
  2. 活动内容(英文歌曲、短剧表演、文化展览等);
  3. 相关要求(准时到场;想表演的同学周三前报名)。

要求:80~100 词,标题与落款已给出,不计入总词数。

✏️ 点击查看范文与点评

NOTICE

May I have your attention, please? In order to enjoy English culture and improve our English, the English Festival will be held in the school hall at 2:00 p.m. this Friday.

There will be English songs, short plays and a culture show. Not only can you enjoy wonderful performances, but you can also make friends with English lovers. Those who want to perform, please sign up before Wednesday. Everyone is expected to arrive on time and keep the hall clean.

Don't miss it! Everyone is welcome to join us.

the Student Union

点评:① 五要素齐全:标题、宣布、时间地点、内容要求、落款;② 亮点:will be held 被动、Those who 定语从句、Not only 倒装句;③ 全篇无一处 I,通知口吻地道;④ 约 95 词,符合要求。

考点

🎯考点提示
  • 通知类应用文近年在杭州中考及各区模考中频繁出现,常考场景:讲座、比赛、社团招新、志愿活动招募;
  • 评分关键:格式五要素(标题/开头/主体/结尾/落款)完整、时间地点介词准确、通知口吻(被动语态、第三人称)到位;
  • 备考策略:把"will be held 句 + Those who 句 + is expected to 句"三句背成条件反射,任何通知题套入即可成文。

诵读 Read Aloud

🎙️范文诵读 · 英语文化节通知(建议背诵)

NOTICE

May I have your attention, please? In order to enjoy English culture and improve our English, the English Festival will be held in the school hall at 2:00 p.m. this Friday.

There will be English songs, short plays and a culture show. Not only can you enjoy wonderful performances, but you can also make friends with English lovers. Those who want to perform, please sign up before Wednesday. Everyone is expected to arrive on time and keep the hall clean.

Don't miss it! Everyone is welcome to join us.

the Student Union

诵读小贴士:背诵时按五要素"点名"——NOTICE(标题)→ May I have your attention(开场)→ will be held + 时间地点(核心句)→ Those who / is expected to(要求)→ welcome + 落款。把活动换成"运动会"或"读书分享会",改两处名词就是新通知——这是中考里性价比最高的模板之一。

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