情景导入
学校英语角设了一个"树洞信箱",同学们可以匿名投递自己的烦恼。这周的信里写着:作业太多睡不够、想加入篮球队又怕耽误学习、和同桌闹了别扭不知道怎么和好……
老师说:把你的烦恼和解决办法写成英语短文,就是中考常考的 problem and solution(问题解决)类作文。
它的写法像"看病开药方":先说清"病症"(问题是什么、带来什么影响)→ 再开"药方"(怎么解决的)→ 最后写"疗效"(现在怎么样了)。这一讲我们把这张药方写明白。
核心词汇
烦恼与解决高频表达:
| 类别 | 常用词汇 |
|---|---|
| 常见烦恼 | too much homework(作业太多)、feel stressed(感到压力大)、stay up late(熬夜)、have a fight with(与……闹矛盾) |
| 描述影响 | can't fall asleep(睡不着)、lose interest in(对……失去兴趣)、feel down(情绪低落) |
| 解决办法 | make a plan(制订计划)、talk to sb.(找人倾诉)、take up a hobby(培养爱好)、say sorry first(先道歉) |
| 结果改变 | work out(解决)、get on well again(重归于好)、feel much better(感觉好多了) |
句型与结构
四步结构(可合并为三段):
- 提出问题:Some time ago, I had a problem that made me really upset.(先声明有个烦恼,吊起读者胃口)
- 具体描述:问题是什么 + 影响——I had a fight with my best friend over a small thing. We didn't talk for a whole week, and I couldn't focus on my study.
- 解决过程:具体做了什么——I asked my mother for advice. She told me to say sorry first. So I wrote him a note and we had a long talk.
- 结果感悟:Now we get on well again. I've learned that a true friend is worth an apology.
核心语法:宾语从句(转述别人的建议):
- She told me that I should say sorry first.(她告诉我应该先道歉。)
提分句型:
- make + 宾语 + 形容词:The problem made me upset.
- instead of doing:I talked to him face to face instead of sending messages.
听说训练
写前口头操练(先说顺再下笔):
- Some time ago, I had a problem with my best friend. (前段时间,我和最好的朋友闹了矛盾。)
- My mother told me that I should say sorry first. (妈妈告诉我应该先道歉。)
- Now we get on well with each other again. (现在我们又和好如初了。)
辨析对比
| 词 | 侧重 | 常用搭配 |
|---|---|---|
| problem | 需要解决的难题、麻烦 | solve / work out a problem |
| question | 需要回答的问题、疑问 | answer / ask a question |
| trouble | 麻烦、困境(常不可数) | be in trouble、have trouble (in) doing |
口诀:"解决"配 problem,"回答"配 question;trouble 常不可数,have trouble doing sth. 是固定搭配。
文化角
英语里谈论烦恼有句谚语:A problem shared is a problem halved.(烦恼说出来,就少了一半。)西方学校鼓励学生找 school counselor 或写 journal(日记)疏解情绪;中国文化里则常说"解铃还须系铃人"。把这样一句谚语放在作文开头或结尾,是 problem 类作文的天然"金句",阅卷老师眼前一亮。
易错点
- 问题写一半:只说 I was unhappy,不说为什么——问题要具体:和谁、因为什么、有什么影响。
- 宾语从句语序倒装:She asked me what was the problem ❌ → She asked me what the problem was ✅。
- 解决过程一笔带过:I solved it. 就完了——过程才是主体段,至少写两三个动作。
- 时态混乱:叙述经过用过去时,结尾写现状要切回现在时(Now we are good friends again.),切换点要清晰。
中考真题
学校英语报以 My Problem and How I Solved It 为题征文。请写一篇短文,内容包括:
- 你曾经遇到的一个烦恼及其影响;
- 你是如何解决它的;
- 你的收获或感悟。
要求:80~100 词,可适当发挥。
✏️ 点击查看范文与点评
Some time ago, I had a problem that made me really upset.
I had a fight with my best friend Chen Lei over a small thing. We didn't talk for a whole week. I felt so down that I couldn't focus on my study. Then I asked my mother for advice. She told me that a true friendship was worth an apology. So instead of waiting, I wrote him a note and said sorry first. That evening, we had a long talk by the Grand Canal and finally understood each other.
Now we get on well again. I've learned that sharing our feelings is the best way to solve a problem.
点评:① 四步俱全:问题—影响—解决—感悟;② 宾语从句转述妈妈的建议,自然准确;③ 亮点句型:so...that、instead of doing;④ 运河边长谈的细节真实动人,结尾感悟点题。
考点
- 烦恼与解决话题贯穿八年级下 Unit 4(Why don't you talk to your parents?),常与建议信互为"姊妹题":一个写自己怎么解决,一个写给别人支招;
- 评分要点:问题具体、过程完整、结尾有感悟,时态"过去—现在"切换清晰;
- 备考策略:准备一个"万能烦恼故事"(与朋友闹矛盾或学业压力),既能写此题,也能作为议论文的例子复用。
诵读 Read Aloud
Some time ago, I had a problem that made me really upset.
I had a fight with my best friend Chen Lei over a small thing. We didn't talk for a whole week. I felt so down that I couldn't focus on my study. Then I asked my mother for advice. She told me that a true friendship was worth an apology. So instead of waiting, I wrote him a note and said sorry first. That evening, we had a long talk by the Grand Canal and finally understood each other.
Now we get on well again. I've learned that sharing our feelings is the best way to solve a problem.
诵读小贴士:背诵时体会"情绪曲线"——upset、felt so down 是低谷,said sorry、had a long talk 是转折,get on well again 是回升。结尾 I've learned that... 用现在完成时点出感悟,这个句子值得单独背下来,任何叙事作文都能用。