🔤 初中英语八年级下写作课十讲(陆续上线)书面表达问题解决成长话题

第4讲 My Problem and Solution 烦恼与解决

每个初中生都有自己的烦恼:作业太多、压力太大、和朋友闹矛盾。学会"提出问题—分析原因—给出办法—写出改变"的问题解决式作文,既能倾诉也能拿分。

难度:★★★★★

情景导入

💡情景导入 · 树洞信箱的来信

学校英语角设了一个"树洞信箱",同学们可以匿名投递自己的烦恼。这周的信里写着:作业太多睡不够、想加入篮球队又怕耽误学习、和同桌闹了别扭不知道怎么和好……

老师说:把你的烦恼和解决办法写成英语短文,就是中考常考的 problem and solution(问题解决)类作文。

它的写法像"看病开药方":先说清"病症"(问题是什么、带来什么影响)→ 再开"药方"(怎么解决的)→ 最后写"疗效"(现在怎么样了)。这一讲我们把这张药方写明白。

核心词汇

📚核心词汇 Word Bank

烦恼与解决高频表达

类别常用词汇
常见烦恼too much homework(作业太多)、feel stressed(感到压力大)、stay up late(熬夜)、have a fight with(与……闹矛盾)
描述影响can't fall asleep(睡不着)、lose interest in(对……失去兴趣)、feel down(情绪低落)
解决办法make a plan(制订计划)、talk to sb.(找人倾诉)、take up a hobby(培养爱好)、say sorry first(先道歉)
结果改变work out(解决)、get on well again(重归于好)、feel much better(感觉好多了)

句型与结构

🧩写作讲解 · 问题解决四步法

四步结构(可合并为三段)

  1. 提出问题:Some time ago, I had a problem that made me really upset.(先声明有个烦恼,吊起读者胃口)
  2. 具体描述:问题是什么 + 影响——I had a fight with my best friend over a small thing. We didn't talk for a whole week, and I couldn't focus on my study.
  3. 解决过程:具体做了什么——I asked my mother for advice. She told me to say sorry first. So I wrote him a note and we had a long talk.
  4. 结果感悟:Now we get on well again. I've learned that a true friend is worth an apology.

核心语法:宾语从句(转述别人的建议)

  • She told me that I should say sorry first.(她告诉我应该先道歉。)

提分句型

  • make + 宾语 + 形容词:The problem made me upset.
  • instead of doing:I talked to him face to face instead of sending messages.

听说训练

💬听说训练 · 开口说

写前口头操练(先说顺再下笔):

  • Some time ago, I had a problem with my best friend. (前段时间,我和最好的朋友闹了矛盾。)
  • My mother told me that I should say sorry first. (妈妈告诉我应该先道歉。)
  • Now we get on well with each other again. (现在我们又和好如初了。)

辨析对比

⚖️易混辨析 · problem / question / trouble
侧重常用搭配
problem需要解决的难题、麻烦solve / work out a problem
question需要回答的问题、疑问answer / ask a question
trouble麻烦、困境(常不可数)be in trouble、have trouble (in) doing

口诀:"解决"配 problem,"回答"配 question;trouble 常不可数,have trouble doing sth. 是固定搭配。

文化角

🌍文化角 Culture Corner

英语里谈论烦恼有句谚语:A problem shared is a problem halved.(烦恼说出来,就少了一半。)西方学校鼓励学生找 school counselor 或写 journal(日记)疏解情绪;中国文化里则常说"解铃还须系铃人"。把这样一句谚语放在作文开头或结尾,是 problem 类作文的天然"金句",阅卷老师眼前一亮。

易错点

⚠️难点 · 易错点
  1. 问题写一半:只说 I was unhappy,不说为什么——问题要具体:和谁、因为什么、有什么影响。
  2. 宾语从句语序倒装:She asked me what was the problem ❌ → She asked me what the problem was ✅。
  3. 解决过程一笔带过:I solved it. 就完了——过程才是主体段,至少写两三个动作。
  4. 时态混乱:叙述经过用过去时,结尾写现状要切回现在时(Now we are good friends again.),切换点要清晰。

中考真题

真题2023 · 浙江杭州中考(改编)

学校英语报以 My Problem and How I Solved It 为题征文。请写一篇短文,内容包括:

  1. 你曾经遇到的一个烦恼及其影响;
  2. 你是如何解决它的;
  3. 你的收获或感悟。

要求:80~100 词,可适当发挥。

✏️ 点击查看范文与点评

Some time ago, I had a problem that made me really upset.

I had a fight with my best friend Chen Lei over a small thing. We didn't talk for a whole week. I felt so down that I couldn't focus on my study. Then I asked my mother for advice. She told me that a true friendship was worth an apology. So instead of waiting, I wrote him a note and said sorry first. That evening, we had a long talk by the Grand Canal and finally understood each other.

Now we get on well again. I've learned that sharing our feelings is the best way to solve a problem.

点评:① 四步俱全:问题—影响—解决—感悟;② 宾语从句转述妈妈的建议,自然准确;③ 亮点句型:so...that、instead of doing;④ 运河边长谈的细节真实动人,结尾感悟点题。

考点

🎯考点提示
  • 烦恼与解决话题贯穿八年级下 Unit 4(Why don't you talk to your parents?),常与建议信互为"姊妹题":一个写自己怎么解决,一个写给别人支招;
  • 评分要点:问题具体、过程完整、结尾有感悟,时态"过去—现在"切换清晰;
  • 备考策略:准备一个"万能烦恼故事"(与朋友闹矛盾或学业压力),既能写此题,也能作为议论文的例子复用。

诵读 Read Aloud

🎙️范文诵读 · My Problem and Solution(建议背诵)

Some time ago, I had a problem that made me really upset.

I had a fight with my best friend Chen Lei over a small thing. We didn't talk for a whole week. I felt so down that I couldn't focus on my study. Then I asked my mother for advice. She told me that a true friendship was worth an apology. So instead of waiting, I wrote him a note and said sorry first. That evening, we had a long talk by the Grand Canal and finally understood each other.

Now we get on well again. I've learned that sharing our feelings is the best way to solve a problem.

诵读小贴士:背诵时体会"情绪曲线"——upset、felt so down 是低谷,said sorry、had a long talk 是转折,get on well again 是回升。结尾 I've learned that... 用现在完成时点出感悟,这个句子值得单独背下来,任何叙事作文都能用。

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