情景导入
班会课上,老师抛出一个问题:Should teenagers do chores at home?(中学生应该在家做家务吗?)
教室立刻分成两派:有人说做家务浪费学习时间,有人说做家务能培养独立能力。老师笑着说:"把你们的观点写下来,就是一篇议论文。"
小舟犯了难:观点我有,可英语议论文该怎么"排兵布阵"?其实入门级议论文只需三步:第一段亮出观点 → 第二段用两三条理由支撑 → 第三段重申观点收尾。这一讲我们就学这套"讲道理"的功夫。
核心词汇
议论文高频表达:
| 功能 | 常用表达 |
|---|---|
| 亮出观点 | In my opinion, ... / I think... / As far as I'm concerned, ... |
| 列举理由 | First / Second / What's more / Most importantly |
| 举例支撑 | For example, ... / Take my family as an example. |
| 总结收尾 | In a word, ... / That's why I think... |
句型与结构
三段式结构:
- 开头段(亮观点):一句话背景 + 一句话观点——Some students think doing chores wastes time. However, in my opinion, teenagers should do chores at home.
- 主体段(摆理由):两三条理由,每条"理由 + 解释/例子"——First, doing chores helps us become independent. Second, it teaches us to understand our parents. For example, after I cooked dinner once, I knew how tired my mother was.
- 结尾段(再总结):换个说法重申观点——In a word, doing chores is not a waste of time but an important lesson of life.
核心语法:观点与理由的连接:
- However 转折引出己方观点:Some people disagree. However, I believe...
- 动名词作主语(议论文利器):Doing chores is good for teenagers.(动名词短语作主语,谓语用单数)
提分句型:
- not... but...:Doing chores is not a burden but a chance to grow.
- The more..., the more...:The more we do at home, the more we understand our parents.
听说训练
写前口头操练(先说顺再下笔):
- In my opinion, teenagers should do chores at home. (在我看来,青少年应该在家做家务。)
- Doing chores helps us become independent. (做家务帮助我们变得独立。)
- In a word, doing chores is an important lesson of life. (总之,做家务是重要的人生一课。)
辨析对比
| 记叙文 | 议论文 | |
|---|---|---|
| 目的 | 讲一件事 | 讲一个理 |
| 主时态 | 一般过去时 | 一般现在时 |
| 主线 | 时间顺序(First... Then...) | 逻辑顺序(First... What's more...) |
| 结尾 | 感受收获 | 重申观点 |
文化角
在欧美家庭,孩子做家务领 pocket money(零花钱)很普遍:修剪草坪、遛狗、洗车都可能"明码标价",家长借此培养孩子的劳动观念和理财意识。而中国家庭更强调"家务是家庭成员的责任"。两种观念各有道理,这本身就是一个很好的议论文素材——在作文里对比中外做法,再亮出自己的观点,很容易出彩。
易错点
- 观点摇摆:第一段说 should,结尾又说 maybe not——议论文观点必须从一而终。
- 理由堆砌无解释:三条理由各一句就完事——每条理由后至少补一句解释或例子。
- 动名词主语配错谓语:Doing chores are good ❌ → Doing chores is good ✅,动名词短语作主语谓语用单数。
- although 和 but 连用:Although it is tiring, but it is useful ❌ → 去掉 but ✅。
中考真题
某英语报开展 Should teenagers do chores at home? 的讨论。请你写一篇短文谈谈自己的看法,内容包括:
- 明确表达你的观点;
- 给出两至三条理由,可举例说明;
- 总结你的看法。
要求:80~100 词,可适当发挥。
✏️ 点击查看范文与点评
Some students think doing chores wastes their study time. However, in my opinion, teenagers should do chores at home.
First, doing chores helps us become independent. If we can cook and wash clothes, we can take care of ourselves in the future. Second, it teaches us to understand our parents. Last month, I cooked dinner for my family for the first time. After standing in the kitchen for an hour, I really understood how tired my mother was. What's more, sharing the housework makes our family happier.
In a word, doing chores is not a burden but an important lesson of life.
点评:① 结构标准:However 引出观点—三条理由—In a word 总结;② 理由后有解释、有真实例子;③ 亮点句型:if 条件句、not...but...、动名词作主语;④ 观点鲜明,首尾呼应。
考点
- 本话题对应八年级下 Unit 3(Could you please clean your room?),"该不该做家务"是教材原文的辩论题,也是中考观点类作文的入门母题;
- 评分要点:观点明确不摇摆、理由分层有支撑、连接词使用规范;
- 备考策略:背熟"观点句 + 三个理由模板 + 总结句",同类话题(该不该用手机、该不该上兴趣班)都可套用同一骨架。
诵读 Read Aloud
Some students think doing chores wastes their study time. However, in my opinion, teenagers should do chores at home.
First, doing chores helps us become independent. If we can cook and wash clothes, we can take care of ourselves in the future. Second, it teaches us to understand our parents. Last month, I cooked dinner for my family for the first time. After standing in the kitchen for an hour, I really understood how tired my mother was. What's more, sharing the housework makes our family happier.
In a word, doing chores is not a burden but an important lesson of life.
诵读小贴士:背诵时抓住议论文的"路标词"——However 亮观点、First / Second / What's more 排理由、In a word 收总结。把这些词读重一点,写作时它们就会自动跳出来给文章搭好骨架。