情景导入
学校职业体验日上,每位同学要写一张英文"心愿卡":长大后想做什么?打算怎么实现?
小舟写下 I want to be a scientist. 然后就卡住了——为什么想当科学家?现在该做什么准备?
写梦想类作文,最忌"光有梦想没有计划"。高分公式是:梦想是什么 + 为什么有这个梦想 + 打算怎么一步步实现。有了 be going to 这个"计划专用时态",梦想立刻从口号变成路线图。
核心词汇
梦想与职业话题词汇:
| 类别 | 常用词汇 |
|---|---|
| 职业 | scientist(科学家)、doctor(医生)、engineer(工程师)、teacher(教师)、pilot(飞行员)、programmer(程序员) |
| 理由 | help sick people(帮助病人)、make our country stronger(让国家更强大)、be interested in...(对……感兴趣) |
| 计划 | study hard(努力学习)、read more science books(多读科学书)、take part in competitions(参加竞赛)、go to a good university(考上好大学) |
| 时间 | when I grow up(长大后)、from now on(从现在起)、in the future(在未来) |
句型与结构
三段式结构:
- 开头段(梦想是什么):Everyone has a dream. I want to be a scientist when I grow up.(总起一句 + 亮出梦想)
- 主体段(为什么 + 怎么做):先写理由——I have been interested in science since I visited the science museum in Hangzhou. Scientists can make our life better. 再写计划,用 be going to 列 2~3 步——I am going to study hard at math and physics. I am going to read more science books and take part in science competitions.
- 结尾段(决心与展望):I know the road is long, but I will never give up. I believe my dream will come true.
核心语法:be going to(计划打算专用):
- 结构:主语 + am/is/are going to + 动词原形——I am going to study harder.
- 与 want to be 搭配:I want to be a scientist, so I am going to work hard at science.(先梦想后计划,逻辑自然。)
- 时间状语:when I grow up、in the future、from now on
提分句型:
- keep doing:I am going to keep reading science books every week.(坚持每周读科学书。)
- 目的状语:I study English hard to read science news from all over the world.(为了读懂世界各地的科学新闻。)
- 名言点缀:Where there is a will, there is a way.(有志者事竟成。)
听说训练
写前口头操练(先说顺再下笔):
- I want to be a scientist when I grow up. (我长大后想当科学家。)
- I am going to study hard at math and physics. (我打算努力学好数学和物理。)
- I believe my dream will come true. (我相信我的梦想会实现。)
辨析对比
| be going to | will | |
|---|---|---|
| 侧重 | 事先想好的计划打算 | 临时决定 / 预测 |
| 例句 | I am going to visit the science museum this weekend.(早就计划好) | Don't worry. I will help you.(当场决定) |
| 作文场景 | 写"我的计划"主力时态 | 写决心和预测:My dream will come true. |
注意:梦想作文里两者常搭配——计划步骤用 be going to,结尾表决心和展望用 will:I am going to work hard, and I believe I will make it.
文化角
英语里表达梦想有个经典说法:follow your dream(追随你的梦想)。美国中学生申请大学时都要写 personal statement(个人陈述),核心也是"梦想 + 行动"——光说 I have a dream 不够,还要展示 what I have done and what I am going to do。马丁·路德·金的著名演讲 I Have a Dream 更是把"梦想"讲成了改变世界的力量。写作文时引用 Where there is a will, there is a way. 会让结尾掷地有声。
易错点
- be going to 丢 be:I going to study hard ❌ → I am going to study hard ✅。
- to 后接动词变形:I am going to studying ❌ → I am going to study ✅,to 后必须接动词原形。
- 职业前丢冠词:I want to be scientist ❌ → I want to be a scientist ✅。
中考真题
假如你是李华,学校英语报正在开展 My Dream 主题征文。请写一篇短文谈谈你的梦想,内容包括:
- 你的梦想是什么;
- 你为什么有这个梦想;
- 你打算如何实现它(至少两条计划)。
要求:80 词左右,可适当发挥。
✏️ 点击查看范文与点评
Everyone has a dream. I want to be a scientist when I grow up.
I have been interested in science since I visited the science museum in Hangzhou two years ago. In my eyes, scientists can make our life better and our country stronger. To make my dream come true, I have some plans. First, I am going to study hard at math and physics. Second, I am going to read more science books and take part in science competitions from now on.
Where there is a will, there is a way. I believe my dream will come true.
点评:① 结构完整:梦想—理由—计划—决心;② be going to 使用规范,First / Second 列计划条理清晰;③ 亮点句型:since 时间状语、目的不定式 To make my dream come true、谚语收尾;④ 约 100 词,梦想有来由、计划可落地。
考点
- 梦想计划类作文对应八年级上 I'm going to study computer science 单元,核心考查 be going to 表打算与 want to be 句型;
- 评分要点:梦想明确、理由真实、计划至少两条且具体可行,结尾有决心;
- 备考策略:提前想好自己的"梦想职业"并准备一条理由 + 三条行动计划,新年计划(New Year's resolutions)类题目也可直接迁移。
诵读 Read Aloud
Everyone has a dream. I want to be a scientist when I grow up.
I have been interested in science since I visited the science museum in Hangzhou two years ago. In my eyes, scientists can make our life better and our country stronger. To make my dream come true, I have some plans. First, I am going to study hard at math and physics. Second, I am going to read more science books and take part in science competitions from now on.
Where there is a will, there is a way. I believe my dream will come true.
诵读小贴士:背诵时注意"梦想句"和"计划句"的分工:want to be 亮梦想,两个 I am going to 排比列计划,读出层层推进的气势。最后一句谚语 Where there is a will, there is a way. 要读得坚定——它是所有梦想类作文的黄金结尾。