🔤 初中英语八年级上写作课十讲(陆续上线)书面表达be going to理想职业

第6讲 My Dream and Plan 梦想与计划

写梦想不能只喊口号,要给梦想配上"行动路线图"。学会"梦想是什么—为什么—怎么实现"三段法,用 be going to 和 want to be 把未来计划写得具体可信。

难度:★★★★★

情景导入

💡情景导入 · 职业体验日的心愿卡

学校职业体验日上,每位同学要写一张英文"心愿卡":长大后想做什么?打算怎么实现?

小舟写下 I want to be a scientist. 然后就卡住了——为什么想当科学家?现在该做什么准备?

写梦想类作文,最忌"光有梦想没有计划"。高分公式是:梦想是什么 + 为什么有这个梦想 + 打算怎么一步步实现。有了 be going to 这个"计划专用时态",梦想立刻从口号变成路线图。

核心词汇

📚核心词汇 Word Bank

梦想与职业话题词汇

类别常用词汇
职业scientist(科学家)、doctor(医生)、engineer(工程师)、teacher(教师)、pilot(飞行员)、programmer(程序员)
理由help sick people(帮助病人)、make our country stronger(让国家更强大)、be interested in...(对……感兴趣)
计划study hard(努力学习)、read more science books(多读科学书)、take part in competitions(参加竞赛)、go to a good university(考上好大学)
时间when I grow up(长大后)、from now on(从现在起)、in the future(在未来)

句型与结构

🧩写作讲解 · 梦想计划三段法

三段式结构

  1. 开头段(梦想是什么):Everyone has a dream. I want to be a scientist when I grow up.(总起一句 + 亮出梦想)
  2. 主体段(为什么 + 怎么做):先写理由——I have been interested in science since I visited the science museum in Hangzhou. Scientists can make our life better. 再写计划,用 be going to 列 2~3 步——I am going to study hard at math and physics. I am going to read more science books and take part in science competitions.
  3. 结尾段(决心与展望):I know the road is long, but I will never give up. I believe my dream will come true.

核心语法:be going to(计划打算专用)

  • 结构:主语 + am/is/are going to + 动词原形——I am going to study harder.
  • 与 want to be 搭配:I want to be a scientist, so I am going to work hard at science.(先梦想后计划,逻辑自然。)
  • 时间状语:when I grow up、in the future、from now on

提分句型

  • keep doing:I am going to keep reading science books every week.(坚持每周读科学书。)
  • 目的状语:I study English hard to read science news from all over the world.(为了读懂世界各地的科学新闻。)
  • 名言点缀:Where there is a will, there is a way.(有志者事竟成。)

听说训练

💬听说训练 · 开口说

写前口头操练(先说顺再下笔):

  • I want to be a scientist when I grow up. (我长大后想当科学家。)
  • I am going to study hard at math and physics. (我打算努力学好数学和物理。)
  • I believe my dream will come true. (我相信我的梦想会实现。)

辨析对比

⚖️易混辨析 · be going to vs will
be going towill
侧重事先想好的计划打算临时决定 / 预测
例句I am going to visit the science museum this weekend.(早就计划好)Don't worry. I will help you.(当场决定)
作文场景写"我的计划"主力时态写决心和预测:My dream will come true.

注意:梦想作文里两者常搭配——计划步骤用 be going to,结尾表决心和展望用 will:I am going to work hard, and I believe I will make it.

文化角

🌍文化角 Culture Corner

英语里表达梦想有个经典说法:follow your dream(追随你的梦想)。美国中学生申请大学时都要写 personal statement(个人陈述),核心也是"梦想 + 行动"——光说 I have a dream 不够,还要展示 what I have done and what I am going to do。马丁·路德·金的著名演讲 I Have a Dream 更是把"梦想"讲成了改变世界的力量。写作文时引用 Where there is a will, there is a way. 会让结尾掷地有声。

易错点

⚠️难点 · 易错点
  1. be going to 丢 be:I going to study hard ❌ → I am going to study hard ✅。
  2. to 后接动词变形:I am going to studying ❌ → I am going to study ✅,to 后必须接动词原形。
  3. 职业前丢冠词:I want to be scientist ❌ → I want to be a scientist ✅。

中考真题

真题2022 · 浙江杭州中考(改编)

假如你是李华,学校英语报正在开展 My Dream 主题征文。请写一篇短文谈谈你的梦想,内容包括:

  1. 你的梦想是什么;
  2. 你为什么有这个梦想;
  3. 你打算如何实现它(至少两条计划)。

要求:80 词左右,可适当发挥。

✏️ 点击查看范文与点评

Everyone has a dream. I want to be a scientist when I grow up.

I have been interested in science since I visited the science museum in Hangzhou two years ago. In my eyes, scientists can make our life better and our country stronger. To make my dream come true, I have some plans. First, I am going to study hard at math and physics. Second, I am going to read more science books and take part in science competitions from now on.

Where there is a will, there is a way. I believe my dream will come true.

点评:① 结构完整:梦想—理由—计划—决心;② be going to 使用规范,First / Second 列计划条理清晰;③ 亮点句型:since 时间状语、目的不定式 To make my dream come true、谚语收尾;④ 约 100 词,梦想有来由、计划可落地。

考点

🎯考点提示
  • 梦想计划类作文对应八年级上 I'm going to study computer science 单元,核心考查 be going to 表打算与 want to be 句型;
  • 评分要点:梦想明确、理由真实、计划至少两条且具体可行,结尾有决心;
  • 备考策略:提前想好自己的"梦想职业"并准备一条理由 + 三条行动计划,新年计划(New Year's resolutions)类题目也可直接迁移。

诵读 Read Aloud

🎙️范文诵读 · My Dream and Plan(建议背诵)

Everyone has a dream. I want to be a scientist when I grow up.

I have been interested in science since I visited the science museum in Hangzhou two years ago. In my eyes, scientists can make our life better and our country stronger. To make my dream come true, I have some plans. First, I am going to study hard at math and physics. Second, I am going to read more science books and take part in science competitions from now on.

Where there is a will, there is a way. I believe my dream will come true.

诵读小贴士:背诵时注意"梦想句"和"计划句"的分工:want to be 亮梦想,两个 I am going to 排比列计划,读出层层推进的气势。最后一句谚语 Where there is a will, there is a way. 要读得坚定——它是所有梦想类作文的黄金结尾。

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