情景导入
小舟的英国笔友 Emma 发来消息:I'm coming to Hangzhou next month. What's the weather like there?(下个月我要来杭州,那儿天气怎么样?)
天气话题有一套专用句型:it 作主语 + 天气形容词。这一讲我们用它把杭州的四季写清楚,还要学会"天气 + 活动 + 感受"的写作公式,让天气作文不再干巴巴。
核心词汇
天气高频词汇(名词与形容词对照):
| 名词 | 形容词 | 中文 |
|---|---|---|
| sun | sunny | 晴朗的 |
| rain | rainy | 下雨的 |
| snow | snowy | 下雪的 |
温度表达:hot(炎热的)、warm(温暖的)、cool(凉爽的)、cold(寒冷的)、humid(潮湿的)
四季与活动:spring(春天)、summer(夏天)、autumn(秋天)、winter(冬天)、go boating(去划船)、enjoy the osmanthus flowers(赏桂花)
句型与结构
核心句型:it 作主语谈天气
- It's + 天气形容词:It's sunny today.(今天晴。)
- It's + 动词-ing(正在下):It's raining now.(现在正在下雨。)
- It often + 动词(经常下):It often rains in spring.(春天经常下雨。)
结构安排:四季分写法
- 开头段:总起一句——Hangzhou is a beautiful city, and its weather changes with the seasons.
- 主体段:按春夏秋冬各写 1~2 句,套用公式"天气 + 活动 + 感受"——In spring, it often rains, and everything turns green. In summer, it's very hot, so people like swimming.
- 结尾段:点出最爱的季节——Autumn is my favourite season, because it's cool and the osmanthus flowers smell sweet.
提分句型:
- so 结果句:It's very hot in summer, so we often stay in the library.
- when 从句:When it snows, the Broken Bridge looks like a picture.(断桥残雪)
听说训练
写前口头操练(先说顺再下笔):
- What's the weather like in Hangzhou? (杭州天气怎么样?)
- It often rains in spring, and everything turns green. (春天经常下雨,万物变绿。)
- When it snows, the West Lake looks like a beautiful picture. (下雪时,西湖像一幅美丽的画。)
辨析对比
| 词 | 词性 | 例句 |
|---|---|---|
| rain | 名词/动词 | The rain is heavy. / It rains a lot in June. |
| rainy | 形容词 | It's a rainy day. / It's rainy today. |
| raining | 现在分词(进行时) | Look! It's raining outside. |
文化角
英国人见面最爱聊天气——Lovely day, isn't it?(天气真好,是吧?)因为英国天气多变,天气成了最安全的寒暄话题。杭州的天气同样"有性格":六月有梅雨(plum rain season),夏天湿热,秋天满城桂花香,冬天偶尔一场雪就能成就"断桥残雪"(Lingering Snow on the Broken Bridge)的名景。给外国朋友介绍杭州天气时,提一句 plum rain 和 the Broken Bridge,对方一定印象深刻。
易错点
- It's rain 的错误:It's rain today ❌ → It's rainy today ✅ 或 It's raining now ✅。
- 漏掉 it 主语:Today is rain ❌ → It is rainy today ✅,谈天气习惯用 it 作主语。
- 季节前介词错误:on spring ❌ → in spring ✅,四季前一律用 in。
中考真题
假如你是李华,你的英国笔友 Emma 下个月要来杭州,她来信询问杭州的天气情况。请你回一封邮件,内容包括:
- 简要介绍杭州四季的天气特点;
- 推荐你最喜欢的季节并说明理由;
- 根据天气给她一条出行建议。
要求:70 词左右,开头结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
✏️ 点击查看范文与点评
Dear Emma,
I'm glad to hear that you're coming to Hangzhou. Let me tell you about the weather here.
In spring, it often rains and everything turns green. Summer is very hot and humid, so people like swimming or staying inside. In winter, it's cold, and sometimes it snows. Autumn is my favourite season, because it's cool and sunny, and the osmanthus flowers smell sweet all over the city. So I think autumn is the best time to visit. Remember to bring a light coat, because it's a little cool in the morning.
I'm looking forward to seeing you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
点评:① 邮件格式正确,三个要点全覆盖;② it 句型多样:it often rains / it's cold / it snows;③ 亮点:because 从句说明理由、so 给出建议、桂花细节有杭州味;④ 约 95 词,层次清楚。
考点
- 天气话题对应七年级下 It's raining 单元,天气问答与描写是期中期末的必考点;
- 核心考查:it 作主语的天气句型、rain / rainy / raining 词性辨析、in + 季节的介词搭配;
- 备考策略:背熟"四季各一句 + 最爱季节两句 + 一条建议"的框架,天气类作文和口语都能通用。
诵读 Read Aloud
Let me tell you about the weather in Hangzhou.
In spring, it often rains and everything turns green. Summer is very hot and humid, so people like swimming or staying inside. In winter, it's cold, and sometimes it snows. Autumn is my favourite season, because it's cool and sunny, and the osmanthus flowers smell sweet all over the city. So I think autumn is the best time to visit Hangzhou.