🔤 初中英语七年级下写作课十讲(陆续上线)书面表达现在进行时看图写话

第5讲 What's Happening Now 看图写话

看图写话专门考现在进行时:图上的人正在做什么,就用 be doing 写出来。掌握"总起一句—分写人物—收尾感受"的观察顺序,一幅热闹的画面就能变成一篇生动的短文。

难度:★★★★★

情景导入

💡情景导入 · 一张西湖边的照片

周末,小舟在西湖边拍了一张照片:有人在划船,有人在拍照,一群孩子在草地上放风筝。英语老师看到后说:"就用这张照片来一次看图写话吧——把照片里正在发生的事写下来。"

小舟提笔写下 They fly kites.——老师摇头:"照片定格的是此刻正在进行的动作,要用 They are flying kites."

看图写话是现在进行时的"主场"。这一讲我们学会两件事:怎么把动词变成 be doing,以及按什么顺序观察和描写画面

核心词汇

📚核心词汇 Word Bank

看图写话高频动词短语(注意 -ing 形式):

原形-ing 形式中文
fly kitesflying kites放风筝
take photostaking photos拍照
row a boatrowing a boat划船
runrunning跑步
lie on the grasslying on the grass躺在草地上

方位表达:on the left / right(在左边/右边)、near the lake(在湖边)、under the tree(在树下);画面总起:It's a sunny Sunday. / What a lively picture!

句型与结构

🧩写作讲解 · 现在进行时与画面描写顺序

核心语法:现在进行时 be + doing

  • 结构:主语 + am / is / are + 动词-ing
  • I am reading. / She is taking photos. / They are flying kites.

动词 -ing 变化三规则

规则例词
一般直接加 -ingplay → playing,read → reading
以不发音 e 结尾,去 e 加 -ingtake → taking,have → having
重读闭音节双写末尾字母run → running,swim → swimming

画面描写三步走

  1. 总起(时间地点天气):It's a sunny Sunday morning. Many people are having fun near the West Lake.
  2. 分写(由近到远/由左到右逐个写人物):每个人物一句 be doing——Near the lake, a man is rowing a boat. On the grass, some children are flying kites.
  3. 收尾(总体感受):Everyone is enjoying the beautiful day. What a lively picture!

听说训练

💬听说训练 · 开口说

写前口头操练(先说顺再下笔):

  • Look! The children are flying kites on the grass. (看!孩子们正在草地上放风筝。)
  • A man is rowing a boat on the lake. (一个男人正在湖上划船。)
  • Everyone is having a good time. (每个人都玩得很开心。)

辨析对比

⚖️易混辨析 · 一般现在时与现在进行时
一般现在时现在进行时
含义经常性、习惯性动作此时此刻正在进行的动作
例句He plays basketball every day.(他每天打球——习惯)He is playing basketball now.(他现在正在打球)
信号词every day, often, usuallynow, look, listen, at the moment

文化角

🌍文化角 Culture Corner

英语里有个说法叫 A picture is worth a thousand words.(一图胜千言。)西方英语课堂也常用 picture description 训练表达,观察顺序讲究 from general to specific——先说整体,再说细节,和我们"总起—分写—收尾"的思路完全一致。西湖十景之一的"苏堤春晓"就常出现在杭州学生的看图写话里:People are walking along the Su Causeway. 这样的句子既真实又有本地特色。

易错点

⚠️难点 · 易错点
  1. 丢掉 be 动词:They flying kites ❌ → They are flying kites ✅,be 和 -ing 缺一不可。
  2. be 动词配错:The children is playing ❌ → The children are playing ✅,children 是复数。
  3. -ing 拼写错误:run → runing ❌ → running ✅;take → takeing ❌ → taking ✅。

中考真题

真题2023 · 浙江杭州中考(改编)

下面是一幅西湖边周日上午的图画:湖上有人划船,草地上孩子们在放风筝,树下一位老人在打太极,路边一些游客在拍照。请根据图画写一篇短文,描述人们正在做的事情,内容包括:

  1. 交代时间、地点和天气;
  2. 描写图中至少 3 组人物正在进行的活动;
  3. 表达你对画面的整体感受。

要求:70 词左右,使用现在进行时。

✏️ 点击查看范文与点评

It's a sunny Sunday morning. Many people are having fun near the West Lake.

On the lake, a man is rowing a boat slowly. On the grass, some children are flying kites and running happily. Under a big tree, an old man is doing tai chi. Look! Near the road, some visitors are taking photos of the beautiful view.

Everyone is enjoying the wonderful morning. What a lively picture!

点评:① 三步结构完整:总起—分写四组人物—收尾感慨;② 每句都有方位短语开头(On the lake / On the grass / Under a big tree),画面有层次;③ be doing 形式全部正确,rowing / flying / doing / taking 拼写无误;④ 约 75 词,符合要求。

考点

🎯考点提示
  • 看图写话是七年级下现在进行时单元的标配写作题,期中期末几乎必考;
  • 核心考查:be + doing 结构完整、be 动词与主语一致、-ing 拼写三规则(尤其 running / swimming 双写);
  • 备考策略:背熟"总起句 + 方位分写句 + 收尾句"模板,考场上按图填入人物和动作即可。

诵读 Read Aloud

🎙️范文诵读 · A Sunday Morning by the West Lake(建议背诵)

It's a sunny Sunday morning. Many people are having fun near the West Lake.

On the lake, a man is rowing a boat slowly. On the grass, some children are flying kites and running happily. Under a big tree, an old man is doing tai chi. Look! Near the road, some visitors are taking photos of the beautiful view.

Everyone is enjoying the wonderful morning. What a lively picture!

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