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学校食堂要改进菜单,英语老师趁机布置了一项任务:用英语写一写自己一天的健康食谱 My Healthy Diet。
小舟写下 I eat three rices every day. 同桌看了直摇头——rice 是不可数名词,不能加 s,也不能用 three 直接数!
写饮食作文,食物词汇和可数不可数是绕不开的两道关。这一讲我们边聊三餐边过关,让你把"吃什么、吃多少、为什么这样吃"写得清清楚楚。
核心词汇
饮食高频词汇:
| 类别 | 常用词汇 |
|---|---|
| 主食(多为不可数) | rice(米饭)、bread(面包)、noodles(面条,常用复数)、porridge(粥) |
| 蛋白质 | egg(鸡蛋)、fish(鱼肉)、chicken(鸡肉)、milk(牛奶)、beef(牛肉) |
| 果蔬 | vegetables(蔬菜)、tomatoes(西红柿)、apples(苹果)、bananas(香蕉) |
| 垃圾食品 | candy(糖果)、chips(薯条)、hamburgers(汉堡)、cola(可乐) |
量的表达:a lot of(许多)、some(一些)、a little(一点,接不可数)、a few(几个,接可数)、a bowl of(一碗)、a glass of(一杯);饮食习惯:have breakfast(吃早餐)、keep a balanced diet(保持均衡饮食)
句型与结构
三段式结构:
- 开头段(观点):We are what we eat. A healthy diet is important for us students.
- 主体段(三餐 + 原则):按 For breakfast / For lunch / For dinner 依次写,再补一句饮食原则——I eat a lot of vegetables, but I seldom eat hamburgers.
- 结尾段(感受):With this healthy diet, I feel great every day.
核心语法:可数与不可数名词的搭配
| 修饰词 | 接可数复数 | 接不可数 |
|---|---|---|
| a lot of / lots of | a lot of apples ✅ | a lot of milk ✅ |
| many / a few | many tomatoes ✅ | ❌ |
| much / a little | ❌ | a little juice ✅ |
提分句型:
- 三餐引导:For breakfast, I usually have an egg and a glass of milk.
- 对比句:I eat more vegetables and less meat.(多吃蔬菜,少吃肉。)
听说训练
写前口头操练(先说顺再下笔):
- For breakfast, I usually have an egg and a glass of milk. (早餐我通常吃一个鸡蛋,喝一杯牛奶。)
- I eat a lot of vegetables and fruit every day. (我每天吃很多蔬菜和水果。)
- A healthy diet keeps me full of energy. (健康的饮食让我充满活力。)
辨析对比
| 修饰词 | 用法 | 例句 |
|---|---|---|
| many | 只接可数名词复数 | I eat many apples every week. |
| much | 只接不可数名词 | Don't drink too much cola. |
| a lot of | 可数不可数都能接 | I eat a lot of vegetables and drink a lot of water. |
文化角
西方营养学有"食物金字塔"(food pyramid):塔底是谷物,中间是果蔬和蛋白质,塔尖是糖和油脂——越往上越要少吃。中国居民膳食指南也讲"谷物为主、餐餐有蔬菜"。杭州人的日常餐桌就很符合健康理念:一碗米饭、清蒸鱼、炒时蔬,饭后再来点龙井茶解腻。写作文时把 Longjing tea 和 steamed fish 写进去,既地道又有杭州味。
易错点
- 不可数名词加 s:three rices ❌ → three bowls of rice ✅,rice、bread、milk 都不可数。
- much 接可数名词:much apples ❌ → many apples ✅ 或 a lot of apples ✅。
- 三餐前用错介词:in breakfast ❌ → for breakfast ✅;“吃早餐”是 have breakfast,不加 the。
中考真题
假如你是李华,你校英语社团正在开展 My Healthy Diet 主题征文。请写一篇短文介绍你的健康食谱,内容包括:
- 你一日三餐通常吃什么;
- 你坚持的饮食原则(多吃什么、少吃什么);
- 健康饮食给你带来的好处。
要求:70 词左右,可适当发挥。
✏️ 点击查看范文与点评
We are what we eat, so a healthy diet is very important for us students.
For breakfast, I usually have an egg, some bread and a glass of milk. For lunch, I eat a bowl of rice with fish and a lot of vegetables. For dinner, I only eat a little, like some noodles and fruit. I try to eat more vegetables and less meat, and I seldom eat hamburgers or drink cola, because too much sugar is bad for my health.
With this healthy diet, I feel full of energy every day.
点评:① 结构清晰:观点—三餐与原则—好处;② a glass of / a bowl of / a little 等量词准确,可数不可数零失误;③ 亮点:more... less... 对比句、because 原因句;④ 约 95 词,内容具体。
考点
- 饮食健康类作文是七年级下食物话题的配套写作,与可数不可数名词考点深度绑定;
- 核心考查:many / much / a lot of / a little 的搭配、量词短语(a glass of / a bowl of)、for breakfast 等三餐表达;
- 备考策略:背熟"三餐模板句"各一句 + 一句饮食原则 + 一句好处,考场按题目要点微调即可。
诵读 Read Aloud
We are what we eat, so a healthy diet is very important for us students.
For breakfast, I usually have an egg, some bread and a glass of milk. For lunch, I eat a bowl of rice with fish and a lot of vegetables. For dinner, I only eat a little, like some noodles and fruit. I try to eat more vegetables and less meat, and I seldom eat hamburgers or drink cola, because too much sugar is bad for my health.
With this healthy diet, I feel full of energy every day.