🔤 初中英语七年级下写作课十讲(陆续上线)书面表达饮食健康可数不可数

第4讲 My Healthy Diet 健康食谱

写健康食谱要过两关:食物词汇关和可数不可数名词关。按"三餐安排—饮食原则—健康感受"三段展开,用 a lot of、some、a little 把食物量说准,作文自然清爽。

难度:★★★★★

情景导入

💡情景导入 · 食堂门口的调查表

学校食堂要改进菜单,英语老师趁机布置了一项任务:用英语写一写自己一天的健康食谱 My Healthy Diet。

小舟写下 I eat three rices every day. 同桌看了直摇头——rice 是不可数名词,不能加 s,也不能用 three 直接数!

写饮食作文,食物词汇可数不可数是绕不开的两道关。这一讲我们边聊三餐边过关,让你把"吃什么、吃多少、为什么这样吃"写得清清楚楚。

核心词汇

📚核心词汇 Word Bank

饮食高频词汇

类别常用词汇
主食(多为不可数)rice(米饭)、bread(面包)、noodles(面条,常用复数)、porridge(粥)
蛋白质egg(鸡蛋)、fish(鱼肉)、chicken(鸡肉)、milk(牛奶)、beef(牛肉)
果蔬vegetables(蔬菜)、tomatoes(西红柿)、apples(苹果)、bananas(香蕉)
垃圾食品candy(糖果)、chips(薯条)、hamburgers(汉堡)、cola(可乐)

量的表达:a lot of(许多)、some(一些)、a little(一点,接不可数)、a few(几个,接可数)、a bowl of(一碗)、a glass of(一杯);饮食习惯:have breakfast(吃早餐)、keep a balanced diet(保持均衡饮食)

句型与结构

🧩写作讲解 · 健康食谱三段法

三段式结构

  1. 开头段(观点):We are what we eat. A healthy diet is important for us students.
  2. 主体段(三餐 + 原则):按 For breakfast / For lunch / For dinner 依次写,再补一句饮食原则——I eat a lot of vegetables, but I seldom eat hamburgers.
  3. 结尾段(感受):With this healthy diet, I feel great every day.

核心语法:可数与不可数名词的搭配

修饰词接可数复数接不可数
a lot of / lots ofa lot of apples ✅a lot of milk ✅
many / a fewmany tomatoes ✅
much / a littlea little juice ✅

提分句型

  • 三餐引导:For breakfast, I usually have an egg and a glass of milk.
  • 对比句:I eat more vegetables and less meat.(多吃蔬菜,少吃肉。)

听说训练

💬听说训练 · 开口说

写前口头操练(先说顺再下笔):

  • For breakfast, I usually have an egg and a glass of milk. (早餐我通常吃一个鸡蛋,喝一杯牛奶。)
  • I eat a lot of vegetables and fruit every day. (我每天吃很多蔬菜和水果。)
  • A healthy diet keeps me full of energy. (健康的饮食让我充满活力。)

辨析对比

⚖️易混辨析 · many / much / a lot of
修饰词用法例句
many只接可数名词复数I eat many apples every week.
much只接不可数名词Don't drink too much cola.
a lot of可数不可数都能接I eat a lot of vegetables and drink a lot of water.

文化角

🌍文化角 Culture Corner

西方营养学有"食物金字塔"(food pyramid):塔底是谷物,中间是果蔬和蛋白质,塔尖是糖和油脂——越往上越要少吃。中国居民膳食指南也讲"谷物为主、餐餐有蔬菜"。杭州人的日常餐桌就很符合健康理念:一碗米饭、清蒸鱼、炒时蔬,饭后再来点龙井茶解腻。写作文时把 Longjing tea 和 steamed fish 写进去,既地道又有杭州味。

易错点

⚠️难点 · 易错点
  1. 不可数名词加 s:three rices ❌ → three bowls of rice ✅,rice、bread、milk 都不可数。
  2. much 接可数名词:much apples ❌ → many apples ✅ 或 a lot of apples ✅。
  3. 三餐前用错介词:in breakfast ❌ → for breakfast ✅;“吃早餐”是 have breakfast,不加 the。

中考真题

真题2022 · 浙江杭州中考(改编)

假如你是李华,你校英语社团正在开展 My Healthy Diet 主题征文。请写一篇短文介绍你的健康食谱,内容包括:

  1. 你一日三餐通常吃什么;
  2. 你坚持的饮食原则(多吃什么、少吃什么);
  3. 健康饮食给你带来的好处。

要求:70 词左右,可适当发挥。

✏️ 点击查看范文与点评

We are what we eat, so a healthy diet is very important for us students.

For breakfast, I usually have an egg, some bread and a glass of milk. For lunch, I eat a bowl of rice with fish and a lot of vegetables. For dinner, I only eat a little, like some noodles and fruit. I try to eat more vegetables and less meat, and I seldom eat hamburgers or drink cola, because too much sugar is bad for my health.

With this healthy diet, I feel full of energy every day.

点评:① 结构清晰:观点—三餐与原则—好处;② a glass of / a bowl of / a little 等量词准确,可数不可数零失误;③ 亮点:more... less... 对比句、because 原因句;④ 约 95 词,内容具体。

考点

🎯考点提示
  • 饮食健康类作文是七年级下食物话题的配套写作,与可数不可数名词考点深度绑定;
  • 核心考查:many / much / a lot of / a little 的搭配、量词短语(a glass of / a bowl of)、for breakfast 等三餐表达;
  • 备考策略:背熟"三餐模板句"各一句 + 一句饮食原则 + 一句好处,考场按题目要点微调即可。

诵读 Read Aloud

🎙️范文诵读 · My Healthy Diet(建议背诵)

We are what we eat, so a healthy diet is very important for us students.

For breakfast, I usually have an egg, some bread and a glass of milk. For lunch, I eat a bowl of rice with fish and a lot of vegetables. For dinner, I only eat a little, like some noodles and fruit. I try to eat more vegetables and less meat, and I seldom eat hamburgers or drink cola, because too much sugar is bad for my health.

With this healthy diet, I feel full of energy every day.

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