情景导入
英语老师让大家写 My Favourite Subject。小舟刷刷写下:I like maths. Maths is interesting. I like maths very much.——三句话全在"喜欢",卷子发下来只得了及格分。
问题出在哪?光说喜欢不够,要说清"为什么喜欢"和"喜欢到什么程度"。
这一讲我们学一个万能展开法:观点(我最喜欢 X)→ 理由(because...)→ 例子(比如某节课/某位老师)→ 打算(我要继续学好它)。四层写下来,内容自然充实。
核心词汇
学科词汇:
| 类别 | 常用词汇 |
|---|---|
| 学科 | Chinese(语文)、maths(数学)、English(英语)、science(科学)、history(历史)、art(美术)、P.E.(体育)、music(音乐) |
| 评价形容词 | interesting(有趣的)、useful(有用的)、important(重要的)、difficult(难的)、relaxing(令人放松的) |
| 时间表达 | on Monday(在周一)、twice a week(一周两次)、after school(放学后) |
理由句储备:It is fun.(它很有趣。)/ It helps me a lot.(它对我帮助很大。)
句型与结构
整体结构(四层,共 7~9 句):
- 亮观点:My favourite subject is science.
- 给理由:用 because 连接——because it is interesting and useful.
- 举例子:写一节具体的课或一位老师,让理由"落地"。
- 表打算:I will work harder at it.(我会更努力学好它。)
必背句型逐个练:
- My favourite subject is science.(favourite 后接单数名词。)
- I like science best because it is interesting and useful.(because 引导原因。)
- Our science teacher, Mr. Wang, always makes the class fun.(老师同位语,加分句。)
- In last week's class, we did an experiment about water.(举一个具体例子。)
- I want to be a scientist when I grow up.(把学科和梦想连起来,漂亮的结尾。)
听说训练
写前口头操练(先说顺再下笔):
- My favourite subject is science.(我最喜欢的学科是科学。)
- I like it because it is interesting and useful.(我喜欢它,因为它有趣又有用。)
- Our teacher always makes the class fun.(老师总能把课上得很有趣。)
- I want to be a scientist when I grow up.(我长大想当科学家。)
辨析对比
| because | so | |
|---|---|---|
| 含义 | 因为(引出原因) | 所以(引出结果) |
| 例句 | I like maths because it is fun. | Maths is fun, so I like it. |
| 常见错误 | Because it is fun, so I like it. ❌ | 两词不能同时出现在一个句子里 |
注意:中文习惯说"因为……所以……",但英语中 because 和 so 只能二选一——这是初一写作最高频的中式英语错误之一。
文化角
英美中学的课表和我们不太一样:除了 maths、English、science,他们还有 drama(戏剧)、cooking(烹饪)等选修课,学生可以按兴趣选课。另外,"数学"在英式英语里是 maths,美式英语里是 math,两种都对,但一篇作文里要保持一致,别一会儿 maths 一会儿 math。
易错点
- because 和 so 连用:Because it is fun, so I like it ❌ → I like it because it is fun. ✅
- 学科名大小写:Chinese、English 由国名变来要大写;maths、science、history 一般小写。
- favourite 后接复数:My favourite subject are ❌ → My favourite subject is science. ✅
- 理由空洞:只写 It is interesting 不够,追问自己一句"哪里有趣",把那节实验课、那位老师写出来。
中考真题
假如你是李华,学校英语角正在开展"我最爱的学科"讨论活动。请写一篇短文谈谈你最喜欢的学科,内容包括:
- 你最喜欢的学科是什么;
- 喜欢它的两个理由(可举具体例子);
- 今后的打算。
要求:60~80 词,语句通顺,理由充分。
✏️ 点击查看范文与点评
My favourite subject is science. I like it best because it is interesting and useful. In class, we often do experiments. Last week, we did an experiment about water, and it was great fun. Our science teacher, Mr. Wang, always makes the class lively. Science also helps me understand the world, like why the Qiantang tide is so big. I will work harder at science because I want to be a scientist when I grow up.
点评:① 四层展开完整:观点—理由—例子—打算;② because 使用正确,未与 so 连用;③ 亮点:用钱塘江大潮举例,理由具体可信;④ 约 80 词,符合要求。
考点
- "最喜欢的学科/老师/季节"属于同一类观点理由型作文,是七年级上期末的高频命题;
- 核心考查:favourite 的用法、because 原因句、一般现在时、例证展开能力;
- 备考策略:为自己最喜欢的学科准备"两个理由 + 一个具体例子",考场上不管题目问学科还是老师,展开法完全相同。
诵读 Read Aloud
Part 1 · 完整范文
My favourite subject is science. I like it best because it is interesting and useful. In class, we often do experiments. Last week, we did an experiment about water, and it was great fun. Our science teacher, Mr. Wang, always makes the class lively. Science also helps me understand the world, like why the Qiantang tide is so big. I will work harder at science because I want to be a scientist when I grow up.
Part 2 · 必背句型快读
My favourite subject is science. I like it best because it is interesting and useful.
We have science on Tuesday and Friday. Our teacher always makes the class lively. Science helps me understand the world. I want to be a scientist when I grow up.
诵读小贴士:背诵时抓住"观点—理由—例子—打算"四个台阶,一层一层往上走;重读 because 后面的理由部分,写作时它就是全文的得分核心。