情景导入
小舟的英国笔友 Tom 发来消息:Your new school looks cool! Can you show me around?(你的新学校看起来真棒!能带我参观一下吗?)
Tom 来不了杭州,小舟决定写一篇短文"云参观":教学楼在哪里?图书馆有多大?操场上能做什么?
介绍学校这类地点描写文有清晰的套路:总起(学校名字和印象)→ 分述(设施 + 位置)→ 收尾(我的感受)。学会它,以后写"我的房间""我的城市"都能套用。
核心词汇
校园设施词汇:
| 类别 | 常用词汇 |
|---|---|
| 建筑 | classroom building(教学楼)、library(图书馆)、science lab(科学实验室)、dining hall(食堂) |
| 场地 | playground(操场)、basketball court(篮球场)、garden(花园) |
| 方位介词 | in front of(在……前面)、behind(在……后面)、next to(紧挨着)、between...and...(在……之间) |
描述用语:big and bright(宽敞明亮)、modern(现代化的)、thousands of books(成千上万本书)
句型与结构
整体结构(总—分—总,共 8~10 句):
- 总起:学校名字 + 一句总体印象——My new school is big and beautiful.
- 分述:挑 3 个设施,每个"there be + 方位 + 一句功能"。
- 收尾:表达喜爱——I like my new school very much.
必背句型逐个练:
- I study in a middle school in Hangzhou.(我在杭州的一所中学读书。)
- There is a tall classroom building in the middle of our school.(there be + 方位。)
- The library is next to the classroom building. There are thousands of books in it.(先说位置,再说内容。)
- Behind the building, there is a big playground.(方位介词提前,句式有变化。)
听说训练
写前口头操练(先说顺再下笔):
- My new school is big and beautiful.(我的新学校又大又漂亮。)
- There is a library next to the classroom building.(教学楼旁边有一座图书馆。)
- We often play basketball on the playground after class.(课后我们常在操场打篮球。)
- I like my new school very much.(我非常喜欢我的新学校。)
辨析对比
| There is | There are | |
|---|---|---|
| 后接名词 | 单数或不可数名词 | 复数名词 |
| 例句 | There is a library in our school. | There are two basketball courts. |
| 就近原则 | There is a desk and two chairs.(be 动词看最近的名词) | There are two chairs and a desk. |
注意:列举多个事物时,be 动词遵循"就近原则"——跟着离它最近的那个名词变,这是考试常设的陷阱。
文化角
英美中学生也上 middle school / junior high school,但他们通常没有固定教室——学生按课表"走班",去不同老师的教室上课,课本放在个人储物柜(locker)里。所以向外国朋友介绍学校时,写上 We have our own classroom and we stay there for most classes,对方会觉得很新鲜。
易错点
- there be 与 have 混用:Our school there is a library ❌ → There is a library in our school. ✅ 或 Our school has a library. ✅
- 方位介词错位:in front of(在物体外部的前面)与 in the front of(在物体内部的前部)意思不同,初一先用 in front of 最稳。
- 单复数不一致:There are a playground ❌ → There is a playground. ✅
- 流水账堆设施:一口气列七八个设施不如精写三个——每个设施"位置 + 活动"两句话,内容更充实。
中考真题
假如你是李华,你的英国笔友 Tom 想了解你的新学校。请写一篇短文向他介绍,内容包括:
- 学校的位置和总体印象;
- 两到三处校园设施;
- 你在学校最喜欢做的事。
要求:60~80 词,语句通顺,条理清楚。
✏️ 点击查看范文与点评
I study in a middle school near the Qiantang River in Hangzhou. My new school is big and beautiful. There is a tall classroom building in the middle of the school. Next to it, there is a library with thousands of books. Behind the building, there is a big playground. After class, I often play basketball there with my friends. It is my favourite time of the day. I like my new school very much!
点评:① 总分总结构清晰:印象—三处设施—感受;② there be 句型三次使用且方位介词准确;③ 亮点:After class 的活动描写让校园有了生活气息;④ 约 80 词,符合要求。
考点
- 校园介绍是七年级上期中考试的高频作文题,中考中常升级为"向交换生介绍学校生活";
- 核心考查:there be 句型及就近原则、方位介词(next to / behind / in front of)、总分总结构;
- 备考策略:画一张校园简图,在图上用英语标注设施和方位,再按"总—分—总"顺序把图"翻译"成短文。
诵读 Read Aloud
Part 1 · 完整范文
I study in a middle school near the Qiantang River in Hangzhou. My new school is big and beautiful. There is a tall classroom building in the middle of the school. Next to it, there is a library with thousands of books. Behind the building, there is a big playground. After class, I often play basketball there with my friends. It is my favourite time of the day. I like my new school very much!
Part 2 · 必背句型快读
My new school is big and beautiful. There is a library in our school. There are thousands of books in it.
The library is next to the classroom building. Behind the building, there is a big playground.
I like my new school very much.
诵读小贴士:诵读时在脑中"走"一遍校园路线——进校门看到教学楼,旁边是图书馆,后面是操场;按空间顺序记忆,背诵和写作都不会乱。