情景导入
英语课上,老师请同学们带一张全家福,用英语介绍自己的家庭。小舟带来了国庆节全家在西湖边拍的照片:爸爸、妈妈、妹妹和他。
可写起来问题来了:"我家有四口人"是 My family have four people 吗?"爸爸是医生"里 doctor 前面要不要加 a?
介绍家庭的作文有一个非常好用的公式:人数(there be)+ 成员身份(职业)+ 各自特点(爱好)+ 感受(I love my family)。这一讲我们把它练熟。
核心词汇
家庭成员词汇:
| 类别 | 常用词汇 |
|---|---|
| 长辈 | father / dad(爸爸)、mother / mum(妈妈)、grandfather(爷爷/外公)、grandmother(奶奶/外婆) |
| 平辈 | brother(兄弟)、sister(姐妹)、cousin(堂/表兄弟姐妹) |
| 统称 | parents(父母)、family member(家庭成员) |
职业词汇储备:teacher(教师)、doctor(医生)、driver(司机)、worker(工人)、nurse(护士)、engineer(工程师)
句型与结构
整体结构(四步走,共 7~9 句):
- 报人数:There are four people in my family.(我家有四口人。)
- 列成员:They are my father, my mother, my sister and I.(注意 I 放最后,表示礼貌。)
- 逐个介绍:每人一到两句——职业 + 爱好/特点。
- 收尾感受:We love each other. I love my family.
必背句型逐个练:
- There are four people in my family.(there be 句型,be 动词跟着后面的名词变化。)
- My father is a doctor. He works in a hospital in Hangzhou.(职业前记得加 a/an。)
- My sister is only five years old. She likes drawing pictures.(第三人称单数,like 要加 s。)
听说训练
写前口头操练(先说顺再下笔):
- There are four people in my family.(我家有四口人。)
- My father is a doctor and my mother is a teacher.(我爸爸是医生,妈妈是教师。)
- My sister likes drawing pictures.(我妹妹喜欢画画。)
- I love my family very much.(我非常爱我的家。)
辨析对比
| There be 句型 | have / has | |
|---|---|---|
| 含义 | 某地"存在"某人某物 | 某人"拥有"某物 |
| 例句 | There are four people in my family. | I have a sister. |
| 常见错误 | My family there are four people ❌ | My family have four people ❌ |
正确说法:There are four people in my family. ✅ 或 My family has four people.(family 看作整体,用 has)——初一阶段推荐只用 there be,最稳妥。
文化角
英语中列举包括自己在内的一群人时,习惯把 I 放在最后:my father, my mother and I,这是英语的礼貌顺序。另外,西方家庭多为 nuclear family(核心家庭,只有父母和孩子),而中国常见三代同堂的 big family——所以介绍爷爷奶奶时可以自豪地写上 We live together and we are happy,外国读者会觉得很温馨。
易错点
- there be 主谓不一致:There is four people ❌ → There are four people. ✅
- 职业前漏冠词:My father is doctor ❌ → My father is a doctor. ✅
- 第三人称单数漏 s:My sister like drawing ❌ → My sister likes drawing. ✅
- 代词混用:介绍爸爸用 he,介绍妈妈用 she,别写着写着"他她不分"——写完通读一遍专查代词。
中考真题
假如你是李华,你的英国笔友 Tom 想了解你的家庭。请写一篇短文介绍你的家庭,内容包括:
- 家庭人数和成员;
- 父母的职业和特点;
- 全家常做的一项活动。
要求:60~80 词,语句通顺,条理清楚。
✏️ 点击查看范文与点评
There are four people in my family: my father, my mother, my little sister and I. My father is a doctor. He works in a hospital in Hangzhou and he is very busy. My mother is a teacher. She is kind and she cooks well. My sister is five years old and she likes drawing pictures. At weekends, we often walk around the West Lake together. We love each other. I love my family!
点评:① 四步公式完整:人数—成员—逐个介绍—感受;② there be、职业冠词、第三人称单数全部正确;③ 亮点:全家西湖散步的细节让文章有画面感;④ 约 80 词,符合要求。
考点
- 家庭介绍是七年级上期中、期末考试的高频作文题,也常与"介绍朋友的家庭"变形出现;
- 核心考查:there be 句型、职业名词前的冠词 a/an、第三人称单数动词加 s、人称代词 he/she 的正确使用;
- 备考策略:按"人数—成员—职业—爱好—感受"背熟一篇 80 词范文,考试时替换家庭信息即可。
诵读 Read Aloud
Part 1 · 完整范文
There are four people in my family: my father, my mother, my little sister and I. My father is a doctor. He works in a hospital in Hangzhou and he is very busy. My mother is a teacher. She is kind and she cooks well. My sister is five years old and she likes drawing pictures. At weekends, we often walk around the West Lake together. We love each other. I love my family!
Part 2 · 必背句型快读
There are four people in my family. They are my father, my mother, my sister and I.
My father is a doctor. My mother is a teacher.
My sister likes drawing pictures. We often walk around the West Lake at weekends.
诵读小贴士:背范文时想着自家的全家福,把“人数—成员—职业—爱好—感受”五个格子逐一填满,句序就不会乱。